Transformers... 1941. Giving new meaning to car chases.



What do you think of the idea? The image's taking for bloody ever to research and it still needs a lot of work... But I'd like some feedback please :)

HAHAHAHA i want this.



i would say make it more 1941... make the illustration look distressed. if you know what i mean... other than that this is perf.

-mike

The styles fits Threadless very well, which gives it a great fighting chance. I feel that once you feel comfortable with it to run it through.

You have a very strong style, so keep up the good work.



If you have time... here is my first

Very cool! I really like the shapes, very clean.

very nice

very cool. I'd submit it.



critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/33924/Parashrimps

i like the illustration

this is good! but maybe add some grey cuz its kinda hard to see them. or maybe cuz you dont have it centered. and definitly work on the edges. but i like where this is goin.

go for it, I like the idea

a little more detail... I like it.

Tightened thte illustration up and applied the old chicago-esque style... bit of distressing and a bit of photocopying/old movie lines... Upped colour count too. But it's still mostly a black and white image.



What do you think?



And I think maybe 1932 would be more appropriate... Who's familiar with gangster historical dates?

i think this is really great! the yellow hats are so dick tracey... perfect

much better

yeah, scary gang

I love the color you added. Submit this.



Please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/33924/Parashrimps#v3

cool

i like the silhouettes a lot but i think you are over powering them with too much white.



let some of more of the details just drop into shadow- kick ass silhouettes you have going on- less is more.



look at the god father an the cool low key lighting- they only show what they need to and the rest is in shadow.



maybe just get simpler and more silhouetted as you get down to the feet area. you don't need so much mech complexity there- you already have enough in the top./face areas.



balance- sorry to be so academic-

It feels like it need text.

Update - it's cool I totally agree with the silhouette thing... It's so hard take away the details after you've laboured so hard on them! I believe what I got now is a nice balance between detail and silhouette... What do you think? :)



And then option 1 or 2 - 2 has a jumbled Chicago, well, you know why :)

Submit this!! Without any text.

Man this is awesome!!! Submit it. Really like the concept and your style. I'd definetly buy this!

dig option 2! yez..

more the shape the words make in design than as text.. play..

Great job. This looks amazing. I'd say do it without the text.

I dig the non-text version. It's a great style. I'd buy it.

Wonderful illustration. No text.

Very cool, I prefer it without the text. My only two gripes are both the numberplate on the right-hand robot and the bowtie on the middle robot seem to be at odd angles

hate the text

but it's fantastic otherwise

great work!



critique mine please!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/16525/boys_are_seXY

I love! And I agree, I don't like the text...everything else is awesome!



Please crit mine! http://www.threadless.com/critique/34097/Bunny_Pause

Wonerful, love the way it fades away to almost no colour at the bottom in ver 3.

big yes to this! last time i saw it there was no color and ya couldnt see it too well. the changes help a lot! Sub this ASAP!

bad ass dude I like this a lot

K I made some last minute little changes and subbed it under a different name (Former Chicago), didn't think the year was necessary.



Thanks all for your comments! :D

I'm late, but I just want to say that this is awesome.

it's pretty cool!