I look forward to feedback. Thanks.

is this hand drawn? If it is I'm impressed. It seems a little weird on a shirt though. A little too big and way too complex. The candle seems to long and the placements a little off. However the cake looks yummy :D i want some cake now! Aw....how sad for me...but back to the design, I don't feel like your message is strongly conveyed in the image. Like i don't think i would look at this and instantly understand.(Nothing against intelligent tees but still) But maybe I'm just slow...

Yes, it is painted.

The candle was composed at real size to the cake.

i like the illustration but might like it better on a non-white shirt.

placement needs a lil work.

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Changed the position to the tummy. And on cream color or sand.



Let me know if this works better. Thanks.

Any specific suggestions?

Anyone?

Hmmm... I might change the placement to like the lower right or keep it centered in the chest area... to me it just seems kind of weird where it's at. I like the artwork though.

Nice drawing. The orange stripe on top of the cake, though, looks like it curves up away from the top of the cake.

I'd make the top of the cake and the outside a little bit lighter.

Lightened the top and side of cake. Positioned to center and a bit smaller to fit in well.

I think this is the strongest so far. Still, while the drawing is lovely, I think the concept is a bit week. Maybe if you tried a different shirt color. No matter what, this an excellent illustration.



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Changed it to a dark color with some confetti in white.

I'm not sure if a close up is needed to see that it is based from a photo but actually a painting.

Thanks Mr. Spiers. I always appreciate your comments.