This image was part of my final project for art class in high school. I used a black fine-liner on paper.

This is my first critique. Let me know what you think.

Check these out for color/placement options:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/33839/Dotcam_Black

http://www.threadless.com/critique/33838/Dotcam

Possible in white on black, too.

It's a cool picture but to me it looks awkward with the strap cutoff. I thought it was a walking robot at first.

I don't really see the walking robot. I just think it would look weird without straps...

BIGGER! i want it bigger :)



Please check mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/33917/Pythagoras_Thought_In_The_Sun

The picture is good, but it doesn't seem like a great t-shirt design.

any other thoughts on this one?

I agree with The Dot, what if it was slung around the neck?

figure something out with the layout- maybe just go super HUGE to where is wraps around the side- perhaps we can see that cool detail- (lke mr. dot says)



if you finished more of the strap drawing to where it pointed down and slung around the neck- awesome idea. mr. red tape.



ok you've already got some great advice- im done.

the thing with the straps around the neck is that it's been done a million times... just type "camera on shirt" into google...

Maybe a line of polaroid's above it? Hanging from a line?

drawing is cool but you need to create a concept for this tee. A tee with a single camera isn't impressive.

alright... I'll try to figure something out. Thanks for the comments!

I agree with the slung around the neck comment.

which one? that I should do it or that it's been done before?