nu-retroman

A stereo-typical retro character given a modern look.

i'm not digging the outline, or how brite he is.

Critique Me:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/32880/INDIVIDUAL

http://www.threadless.com/critique/33614/Elefant

Maybe a bit too simple. Can you add some context.



Could u take a look @ mine pls.

TEXTometry

Needs more concepting

I've removed the outline, made the blue darker and added a red retroman.

I don't know man, still looks kinda too simple. It still needs something but really not sure what.

I agree, it must have some sort of a twist

I like the new version. Gives a nice nod to the simplistic 8 bit ways of yore. I'd totally rock this. Also if i saw this shirt and happen to have old skool 3d glasses i'd definitely put the two together & see if retroman came alive ;-)

Added a red retroman behind the blue one and vice-versa. If you look at this design though 3D glasses, it looks pretty trippy.

yay!!!!!!!!!!!

it would be really cool if this tee actually came with 3D glasses :D I think I'd prefer them to be a little smaller and maybe next to each other instead of one being above the other.

btw, thanks for looking at my critique!

maybe you can add some action like the old casio watches have those stick dudes running etc.

good graphics. in my opinion this would be better smaller. maybe have them fighting or doing something that makes it interesting - like one has a rope around the other's foot and he's holding it ready to pull... i like the little stick humans, though.



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