Solar Spatter.



Name and design changed from previous Critique.

It would help if you had uploaded this as version 2 of the previous critique.

Personally, I don't think this has enough going on visually or conceptually to make this an interesting shirt.

Any suggestions for improvements then?



Here's a link to the Original design

It looks to me like it was made using paint. The red is everywhere and it doesn't even look like paint, there's is no real differentiation in size (well there is but all small dots). Paint splatter to me is:

http://www.sxc.hu/pic/m/k/ki/kingvao/193172_paint_splatter_1.jpg

http://blogs.warwick.ac.uk/images/wsaf/2006/03/08/splat_only_no_text.jpg

Variation in size and splatter the way paint splatters with drips and drops.

Re-sized some spatter and added a new colour (orange).

Is this worth submitting? Or does it still need improving?

Ok, I just submitted this and it got rejected. In my opinion, its a vast improvement from v1 (this one).

Any suggestions on how to improve it even more?



Thanks

i like this version better becuase of how busy it is.this might look good on a blue shirt to.

Or on a black shirt, so it looks like space.

I've placed the design on Light blue, dark blue, black and green t-shirts. Which one looks best, and are there any improvements which could be made?



Thanks,

Loving the improvements now, I'd probably get one of them!

it huge... bright and bold.. kind of jumps off the shirt at you.



nice.



mine is similar in some ways.. but text based... please look at the first:



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