Just a quick illustration. I would vector the image out to make it more clean cut. Also the shading would be more defined. I'm not sure yet on what color tee would make the best background, or even where to place it on the tee. I was thinkin in the bottom left hand side (if you were wearing the shirt). Let me know what you think.....

Thanks....

yeah, def not diggin' how it's presented here...it's a bit 90's nickelodeon looking....not really today's style ya know what i'm saying?

I think its and awesome little illo, imo.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/20844/Neat_Check_out_mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/20844/Neat_Check_out_mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/20844/Neat_Check_out_mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/20844/Neat_Check_out_mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/20844/Neat_Check_out_mine

^I was just here to post that.

oh, you did that....not a good move.

Version 3 was version 2, my computer goofed.

what's up with his eye polking way out of his head?

Added the Rhino. Do you think I should change the colors?

maybe move the nostril down on the rino a bit.







Mutiny!.

The elephant needs a second ear. It looks a bit odd.



Crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/35865/Just_like_you

I think it's made really good. I like the design. something bother me about the "floating" eye. I think that make the missing ear more obvious. I love the colours

please check mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/35247/Tango_is_the_Key_to_my_Heart

I love the little rhino! The floating eye could maybe be moved a little closer the the head though on bothe the elephant and rhino.



Please critique mine!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/35864/Down_In_Front

Thanks I agree the eye is a bit off. Also I will try adding an eye.

I love this, just lose the floating eye and submit it!

Adorable, love the illustration style. I would submit it, nice job!



Please take a peek at mine, it is called, "Artist Out to Sea."



thanks and best of luck!