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god bless phonetics
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come on I need some help :)
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it's neat, the moose should be wearing an army helmet.
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Ryder Revolution on Dec 19 '08 clean up the illustration a bit, maybe get rid of the black lines and go with some sort of shirt color that relates to the design....like army green...
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mmm good idea :)
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the tank is drawn like a childrens illustration. slightly messy but in a good way. the moose however doesnt match up right. its not nearly as well drawn and in a different style. it also needs a helmet. i would avoid the war theme by having a flag maybe sticking out of the tank barrel.
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ok so I'll work on it
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Don't spam your design. k, thx, bye!
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I like the the tank drawing but i'd have to agree that the moose needs some tweaks :)... an army hat would be awesome as well! :D
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This is really funny... but i don't really relate moose and tanks together.. ooo Make it a pig in the tank? The bottom of the tank needs some work too. Clean it up a bit.
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totally agree with the other, the moose needs a army hat...
and then I also agree, clean it up and make the tank and moose the same style... shirt colour...definitely need to go with a different colour... please drop by my design... Bike Session 101 (V2) |
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