The big square robot's out to get your balls. All of them.

hey! thanks 4 the comment..though it didn really help :P

anyways, i like this one! :D the only thing that i don like is the white sqaure bubble..maybe becuz ur usin a red background i donnu..but i like it :)

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haha this is pretty sweet,

I'd wear it

woops, forgot to critique,



I'd play around with line weight hierarchy to push some of the shapes out, otherwise this is really cool.

I'd prefer it on a white background.

Looks cools

i don't totally understand what's going on, but it is well designed. i think the design might be a tad too large on the shirt.

i 2nd that :)

is he slipping on the ball? i like the idea, though...it's cool.

v2 - tweaked colours a bit, and added some more shading details. I think this is less harsh than the firetruck red, which suits this better.



What do you think?

This red is better, it doesn't scream "ZOMFG I NEED SUNGLASSEESS."



The robot looks pretty cool but I'm not exactly sure what the point of it is. Is he just not supposed to get to the ball?

Well it's open to interpretation but he's like a ball-terminator of sorts. No balls, see? he's entirely cubist. You could say it's kind of a bit of cry out against racist if you want to read real deep...



At the end of the day it's just a cool image that offers a bit more to read into than a punchline, I guess.

I like the design. The only thing I'd recommend (which was mentioned on the first version) is messing around with the stroke weights to make it pop a little more.

better color than the first one,

having a neutral robot juxtaposed against a red background is harsh on the eyes all the same.

if red is a must you might want to lessen the intensity (less saturation)

i love the design!!

why 17?





I could use some feedback http://www.threadless.com/critique/33418/Raising_The_Rogue

I still want to see it on a white background, think it would look great.



CaptainSmokes: Why not? ;D

I like how it's executed, but the concept is lagging. Maybe you should have another robot made out od round objects. And then make it a scene in which they're having a battle? Like cubot against roundbot? Then you can have that old should feel of a game like Tekken (or is it Takken?) mixed with the style of the front of comicbooks?



check mine?

I think this is great as it is. Great sense of movement, great design, funny concept. Looks ready to me.

Tweaked some line weight... Didn't go crazy with it. Added a colour option... I still prefer the maroon version better, what do you think?



I didn't go for the whole robot vs robot thing cos I didn't want to make it so convoluted... It's supposed to be like a bullying kinda thing :)

Shadow's a square?



Otherwise, looks great!

everything's square except the ball!

Nice.... on cranberry is okay... but the front portion is a little hard to see cause its a little dark

I thought that shadow was a solitaire board or something!

Maybe if it was a number of squares instead of one large block it would look better.

It might have a more evil look! try giving him different eyes that make him look more evil. Or eyebrows!

I don't even think you need the sphere crossed out in the speech bubble - I'd say a square with an exclamation mark []! would get the message across .

I think it looks awesome! I agree with some of the suggestions....his face right now is a bit dull for what you're trying to say with the speech bubble. I suppose if you change the s.b to the [!] as suggested would make more sense. Or give him an expression...



Great art work!

i dont get it...

Final version... unless I find that there's something that's come off and fell apart :) Tweaked some details, thanks for the square exclamation mark suggestion... do you think it's better than the "no ball" one?

I really like the concept but i don't really get the point of the speech bubble now that the circle inside it is gone.

Looks great but whats that triangle where his junk is? There are also a few spots like on his hand and behind him, are they suppose to be there? Another idea for his thought is a ball with a question mark.

Like all the improvements... I still would put only the exclamation point in the bubble....kind of like..."what the fudge! what this ball is doing here!"....sort of thing.



I think you're pretty much done! cool!

I really like the design.



Perhaps change the name to just "Cube Bot"

Awesome. I agree with having just an exclamation point in the speech bubble or even no speech bubble at all. I think it's clear that the circle is in trouble... it knows it.

I like it but I don't like Red (totally subjective:)) otherwise it's a cool design you should submit it !

I really like how this has come along, the lineweights really help to push out the forms.



I like the little square and exclamation mark, makes it cutesy. Its hard to say what to change, I like it as it is, perhaps various background colors to see what it looks like in front of different values and colors?

The shadows look really great, and i'm about sold. The only problem is that the ball looks like an eye ball.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/32880/INDIVIDUAL

New placement option!

I decided to go for a combination of the square and the no circles thing... I think this is clearer.



Which placement? I like 1 :)

Yeah I like 1 as well

1!

I like this alot!

Ultimate! version 1 FTW.



Be a sport-

http://www.threadless.com/critique/33543/Rough_Sea_s

Version 1 ;D

Version 1. I really like this one



comment on mine?

Great))) very dinamic)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/33558/Butterfly_girl

Final version! All systems go - time to BUST SOME BALLS. Lol :P

OMG, if this gets printed I want it!^^

looks great man!

Score! love it.



Be a sport -



http://www.threadless.com/critique/33543/Rough_Sea_s



http://www.threadless.com/critique/33293/Skulljaculate

that really looks awesome - the updates you made up to this version are great (i like the final choice for the speech bubble especially).

it's solid for sure.

I really like this picture, however I dont think it looks good on a shirt. Good drawing though.





http://threadless.com/critique/409139/Kill_it_before_it_grows

Thanks for yer comments!

This is being scored... 4 days to go! Let's hope!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/190187/Cubistest_bot

Haha Nice :)



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