This is the new version.Please let me know what you think about it...Thanks!

Its not something that I would personally wear, but i do dig your style and think this shirt is well done. For the style that youre going for, I dont think there is much else to do with this, sub it.

Have you considered belt printing? It might be a little overwhelming, though. Either way, I think it's ready for sub.

ready for submission I also think

belt printing?an all-over-the-tee design?i do think it would be a little overwhelming,as you rightly said... thanks for the comments.I really appreciate your opinions.

I like the little character you've created, original. The type is loud, I think there will be a select group that would LOVE this shirt, but for the rest of us, the words are too much. I would like it if you just used the character and removed the type (I understand what you're saying, and it's part of the concept, but I don't think it matters) I think you would have a much stronger shirt design without it. Maybe a few different colored characters that distinguish between the sizes of them? Or two colors, and only color one character to make it stand out of the shirt?

thanks slarve..

"Maybe a few different colored characters that distinguish between the sizes of them?"



Incredibly enough that was the original idea,but it didn't work properly,but who knows?i could give it another try ...thanks again for your honest comment.

i like it. like others, it's more busy than something i'd wear but i think the styleis something i've seen printed here and it could definitely get some fans in competition.

im not totally sure what the black shapes are... they're eyes, right?

the type in glow in the dark ink is a suberb idea.

if you want to work on it more, i'd say flesh out the eye shapes. if you're ready, go ahead!

I really like it!!!!! I like the changes! submit it!!!!!

i think you could submit it

thanks very much for your comments guys.

I'd work a bit more on the presentation, maybe use a blank tee, instead of that model. He doesn't help the design, although I know it is a threadless template.

this one is retago

i like it as is, and the glow in the dark is pretty pro, i saw ready for sub.

I agree on the model not helping the design...



other than that: submit.

I personaly wouldn't wear it. However I like the design and the way you find the words in the midst of the little character. nice touch.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/32880/INDIVIDUAL

i think the design is strong but the bottom corner takes away from it.. maybe a more focus on the shirt and just one person modeling? also do you have any other color scheme ideas?

kinda like some others have said, not my exact style, but i know people who would definitely like it. i think it's ready to submit.

I agree with you on not belt printing it, I'd say its ready to submit

Thanks for the kind comments on my critique.



I like the 80's retro feel of this sub and you have a good illo style.



I'd personally prefer a different message on the T, maybe something more defiant like "You can't see me" or something different entirely.

The colors of the type definitely stand out from the background images. I feel like it could be interesting if you tried kicking back the color and having the viewer look a little harder to find the text. Just a possibility.

I think this is a great concept. Definitely submit it. Don't print on the whole shirt, the front is enough.



Helpful feedback please:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/33489/Up_Up_and_Away



If you know how to do flash, if you could tell me on that link, that'd be great!

i lile the colors but i feel the 'can you see me' should be more integrated into the design.

Good job! I like the glow in the dark! I say submit it now!

Yes! Submit it.

I agree - excellent design, submit!

It's ready to submit I'd say, but I don't think it should be on white; it's a little too hard on the eyes against the white background.

THIS DESIGN IS UP FOR VOTING!

PLEASE:



please,vote here!

great job.. I voted



Please

check this out for me.. thx

Idea is quite good and composition looks rad. I had some trouble seeing the eyes at the beggining but when I was to look the entire composition as a whole it seemed pretty good.



I belive its ready for a submittion :)

it's already up for voting...thanks you for you nnice comment.

i mean..thank you for your nice comment(right version)!

I like the glow in the dark idea. The eyes need some work?

Cool design, and a neat idea with the glow in the dark.

Really like it. The glow in the dark really makes it pop.

Cool! I wud try different colour shirts and maybe different colour instead black.

not sure i would wer it but im sure there a alot who would. Personally i think the type is a little too strong and i would also delete a few of the charecters so that they didnt form a rectangular shape just to give the design a little more of a dispersed feeling. Good work though.

thanks for your comment.