One color. Abstract design.

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Looks sweet, incredibly intricate. However, this detail is some how lost a bit on the shirt. I don't know if it's the color contrast or what.

On white and yellow, contrasting colors.



Let me know if it is better.

what do you think of the design?

the design is cool, but the placement of the guy is weird. this is hard to explain, but the tree branch design doesnt have much depth to it. i think the branches should go from small to big.

last post fot cut off.... they should go from small to big as the guy is walking through. hope that makes sense.



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it looks like he is standing on a big branch but to me that doesnt make sense, even if it is surreal.

looks good ...don't know about the lower branch though.I particulary like the coloured option.

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/32151/black_eyes#v2

I redid the design to have more symmetry and a bit more dimension.

Its very cool, I'm not a fan of the perfect symmetry but awesome design anyway.

Thanks!



Any more suggestions?

really cool, i'd like to see some brown in there instead of the black

just to make it look more tree-like

I've never really been a fan of perfect symmetry, the truth is few things in life are perfectly symmetric and it makes it look bizarre. Of course, if that's the designers intentions, then you definitely made it work!



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Any more suggestions?

I went back to the earlier version and took out the bottom branch. Let me know if this looks better, thanks!

personally im a fan of V3... i think it "popped" more.

I prefered version 3 too .. the whole idea with Magritte is that it should make you think or assume that it's something else ..



Love the line work though



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I also agree go I liked version 3

how did u do this??..nice!



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I like this simple design.....



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