This is a spoof version of Merge by Chalermphol Harnchakkham aka huebucket.



I will not submit this until i get the approval of huebucket or by majority of the voters.



P.S. : This is not meant to offend anyone.

this is too close to the original. i guess that is a complement.

haha thanks

imitation is the best form of flattery :)

i really do love the original design, would get it as a print (when i win some money)

Its a cool idea and I have no idea what the original one is lol, so I guess there isnt anything constructive I could tell you to do lol - thanks for the critique

Haha cool, nice job. Nothing I can think of to change or add. Like the color choice.

it is close to the original yep....if that is what you're looking for then yes its cool..(fix the arms a lil i guess)..



but if its originalily in spoofing tweak it a lil with a pool of yellow/brown water heh and a sewer drain...haha

You guy gotta check out the original one here

http://www.threadless.com/product/1163/Merge



I take no credit for the color choice thingy cause I just followed the original art.



I like the idea of 'tweak it a lil with a pool of yellow/brown water' BUT in a sewer drain !?!?

OK, you've been here since August, get an avatar already. You can't really enjoy being undistinguished, unrecognized, and surely thought to be a newb? :P



I looked at your work, Zebra was a sensational idea, scored higher than most of mine, and if you put a bit more TLC into the rendering it might have been printed. You might want to think about redoing that one. The range target was an easy lift, throw it into a sub and see if it sticks. It needed a bit of wit like the zebra concept.



As far as this sub is concerned, all I can say is that if you're going to spoof a wining threadless design you'd better do it in a big way. If the person (bearded man/lady) you've drawn is being sucked down the drain by the hair on his/her armpits than he/she should have arms thrust out and holding onto the tub sides for dear life. That would be funny and a true spoof of the original merging woman and water concept (or a funny concept unto itself if you did it in your own style as a non spoof).



Anyway, just my take on things, not to be taken as the end all in advice. =]

wow now thats one mature, long crit/ advice



i just might redo the zebra thingy (would love to get move advice on that)



about this design u are quite right, i'm not really good at drawing humans so i used the hair ( beard in your case) to cover out most of the facial expression.



erm whats TLC + i will get an avatar right now



thanks for the comment

Nice avatar =]



TLC =Tender Loving Care



Meaning, the zebra nose is poorly done in comparison to the rest of the drawing. Also, difficult to do, but he should be facing the chart a bit more, seen more from behind him. back of the head



The eye chart is really the fun part and the cue to what's going on, so maybe he doesn't need his hand over his eye, just looking at the chart might do. Also, the chart should just have predators on it, (no sword fish, ostrich etc.) that's the joke. Maybe add a tribe's man with a spear, hyena, wild dog, crocodile, vulture, etc.



Whatever you do, don't lose the style of the drawing, most scorers liked the simplicity of it. Lastly, don't comment on every comment you get when it's up, let the comments roll on for awhile, scoring is not critique, the die is cast you can't change the sub once it's up.



I hope that helps, Cheers!

armpit hair is gross

thanks quister for the comment, it help a lot, makes me wanna redo the zebra thing again.



and as for block33 i'll try to remove the gross armpit hair lol

Why the hell would you do a mock up of an already existing sub? One that's been printed even!



You people are retarded.

hmm posted 2nd version

how come this one totally disappeared? :( i like this.

Yeah this thing is really cool how could you let this die? I love those waves in the middle :0

thanks guys,

but i take no credit for the design on the dress



pls do check out the original design

http://www.threadless.com/product/1163/Merge



i might redo this again, hmm

what do you ppl think ?