Its an emo tree, newly carved broken heart on its branch, wood chips and branches strewn about on the ground.



This is my 2nd submission, feedback? :D





8 Colors used: Light Green, Green, Light Brown, Brown, Grey, Black, White, Red.

aw haha i like it. maybe a black background though?



Heartbroken [click]

You're Such a Loser [click]

Sakura [click]

C.S.I. [click]

Fetus [click]

The Assassin [click]

hahahahahaha

this is great. if i had to suggest anything though i would say to make the heart a little bit more obvious. but other than that this is funny!



crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/32651/Boys_best_friend

maybe use another tool to carve the heart looks like his cutting himself

crit mine :)

sweet, work on the placement, dont change anything about the design just make it more wearable idk how, bur right now its just plopped on there...



http://www.threadless.com/critique/32642/Get_Lost_in_the_Music#lastcomment

I might try to use a different too. I thought he was cutting his arm off not carving a broken heart. I really like the design and I agree with cartooner that you should work with the placement. I also like it on the fourth color, sand I think?

Yeah, sand. I used "sand" as the background. :)



Glad you all like it, and yes I will take all suggestions into account, thanks everyone! :D

Not my style but well done. I'd give it a 4/5 in the ratings.

I changed the saw and replaced it with a knife, added more wood chips, moved the branches, and repositioned it as well.



I also removed Red from the palette, the colors are now:



White, Black, Light Green, Green, Light Brown, Brown, Dark Brown and Grey.



Also included sample colors according to requests.



Enjoy! :)

Took White out of the color palette, picked a lighter shade of Gray, and added Red again. I repositioned the placing on the shirt and made a few other minor revisions.



Colors:

Black, Light Green, Green, Light Brown, Brown, Dark Brown Crimson (Deep Red) and Light Gray.



Enjoy! :)

I like what you have done with it. The knife is a better tool to use. I really think it works the best on sand. For the placement maybe try starting it down in the bottom left corner and then you can rotate it so it is going up the shirt. I really like it!

olive green looks cool

bleeding broken heart on an emo weeping willow!



the concept is really nice but i'd really consider the suggestions about the placement. play around with it some more.

Hmmm bleeding broken heart huh? heheheh ...can be done. :D



Once again, thanks for the suggestions, I fiddle with the placing some more, and most probably work in a few cosmetic revisions.

Did some relatively minor changes. Added some blood around the heart and on the knife, as well as a few drops, but they are tiny and only noticeable on close inspection.



I re-adjusted the placement, similar to how MeinenM suggested.



Looks good to me, what do you think? :D

I'm fixing something, V5 coming soon.

you should make the eye more noticeable

haha nice

*bump* No more feedback?



Do you think this is set for submission?



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(Just for the record, I'm not an emo kid.) hahaha

Last one, going to push this into the running already.



*crosses fingers*





**Thanks again the the suggestions and the comments!

Hahaha...dang typos



**Thanks again for all the suggestions and comments!! That's better...

I like this a lot, its really clever and well drawn. good job

brill.... just brill..... really love it

Thanks Splufin and leechanli! I'm glad you like it :D

oops Spluftin** (there I go again) haha

Sick illustrating skills! Maybe try it on white?

Was thinking about it on white, but I settled on army green, its a nice and neutral shade, doesn't drown out the light tones or the dark, and army green can be worn with pretty much anything... :D But then again so can white.. I'm resting my brain right now, don't wanna think about much for an hour. Hah!



Thanks for the comments everyone, very much appreciated!

i'm pretty sure you can submit both options green and white

those revisions turned out great! now go and submit this so i can give it a 5!



good job b-M-d!

I really like this. It's very funny and cleverly drawn!



Mine?

Mwahah this makes me laugh.

The way he is holding the knife seems a little strange, it's coming out of one finger.

I made it so that it looks like its being held between thumb and forefinger, I didn't make the "hands" too hand like because I didn't want to personify the tree too much. :)

awesome when its goes on sale i am buying it

But shouldn't you be able to see the other end of the knife?

normally we would :D but Treemo's got leaves covering the knife handle, kinda like the tassle on a spear, meant to confuse the eye... hahaha just kidding.



But yeah, the knife handle isn't visible because of the "foliage".

wow, you demolished my tree illustration. This is sick...



but check mine out if you want.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/32649/Hope_Lives

Anyway, wish me luck! :D

Final (pushing this straight into the running)







Thanks again to everyone for the suggestions and comments, all your support is appreciated! :)

$5

Score "Treemo"? Link to submission here. :D Thank again everybody!!!

oops. Thanks again ** hee hee