This is snow day fun, but I added a little something. I never did want winter to end when I was a child.

I really like this design a lot, and I don't really say that a lot for White Tees! The pastel colours look excellent and make it look retro and clean at the same time!



I don't know why, but the design on the fifth person (sledding down backwards) looks a little off. It honestly looks like he is sledding up the hill. Also, the shadow of the person about to smack the groundhog in the head seems to contradict the shadow on the groundhog himself.



Also, have you thought about placing the one person climbing the hill to go back down on the back of the shirt.

Thanks for the nice comments. I thought about the shadows going different ways... and then did it anyway. D'oh!

I like the climber on the back idea. I'll try that.

New version coming up.

Shadows aligned.

Sled tracks downhill.

Up hill (no fun part) on the back.

I really like this one - no joke - I'm just not sure you would see the ground hog at a glance - could you emphasize it somehow? - check mine out http://threadless.com/critique/404204/Paper_beats_scissors I need critics

what would a splatter mark on the bottom right of the back look like? - kinda like kid is walking up the hill after he ran the hedgehog over

Tighter composition. Scared face on the groundhog.

aw haha



Terror of Death...? [click]

You're Such a Loser [click]

Autumn Love [click]

Winter is Coming [click]

What about as a long sleeved tee?

I like this. I wished it was drawn in a more cartoon manner, but that's just me.



Please check out my second critique submission:

www.threadless.com/critique/32564/Mice_Courtship