I saw a hexagon and got inspired.



What do you think?

i'd make the shirt some other color that isn't white.. have you considered making the bees' trails geometric too? that could be cool.. overall, i love it. it's simple and nice.

by the way, if you can, check mine too ;-)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/32445/What_I_don_t_have_health_insurance

Why not put it on a Yellow T-Shirt with the Bee Hive Geometric and the bee's trail could be the specialty print "embroidary?" It looks amazing, I love the Bee design!



Check mine out and tell me what you think!

Cool concept, which is nice and simple. I agree with the above, which is that most if not all of the design ought to be geometric, which would make it more striking. It might be a nice addition if you had a flower which was perfectly shaped for a bee to dock into (with petals forming something like a dodecahedron). I think (while I'd try to avoid white shirts for the most part) the problem with coloring the background is the loss of contrast, considering you have pretty light shades for the foreground elements.



If you have a minute, please take a look at this:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/32429/Bullicorn_and_the_Hummingbird

I like it, but I also think it needs something. I don't mean that you should lose the minimal quality, but I also think that maybe you should consider making the hive out of trapezoids, or some other geometric shape. Overall, I really like it.

P.S. This is Taylor ;-)

Ohhhhh, that is so cute, some thing like 2years old would do...

I meant in a good way, don't be mad, be glad...

The colours are perfect, concept is cool I guess, but I think the beehive should echo the hexagon too?



Where's daddy?

What's new

-Made the smaller bees' paths geometric shapes

-Changed the t-shirt color to either cream or yellow



What are your opinions on these?

-What color? Cream or Yellow?

-Should the bees' tracks be done in embroidery?

-Anything changed or added?



BTW: I tried to make the beehive out of hexagons and it looked very bad.

hey this is claire,

I like the cream color more... would you consider doing what that one person said and put a goemetrical flower on it? I think that would be really pretty. If there is no other way to make the hive look geometrical, then it's great!

cuuute!! i like it on cream better



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What about Trapezoids for the hive?

haha, super cute!



critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/32595/Trash

I tried to put the hive in other shapes (trapezoids, hexagons, squares) but it just didn't look as good. I'm going to submit it at the end of tonight unless anyone brings any big problems forward. Thanks to everyone for your support! And vote for it when it goes into voting!

Sending it in! Please vote!