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Like the concept, I think that the slot machine needs some work though. A bit more detail would be good and I'm not sure about the different stroke widths.

Okey thanks for the comment

I'll post V2 soon

Okey thanks for the comment

I'll post V2 soon

Two logical comments that might be too logical for your design.

The money looks too much like banana chips.

What was the monkey putting into the slot machine to make it work?

Haha yeah i agree with the banana chips thingy..



But for 'What was the monkey putting into the slot machine to make it work?'.. must we go to that extend..

i thought it was supposed to look like banana chips, seemed kinda apt.

sorry , apt = ?



+ can i change it to casino chips (the coloured ones instead) ?



thanks

Oh. I thought the banana chips would fit.

haha aw cute idea



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hehe yeah i might change it to banana chips instead



+ 'the hands and ears are weird' part pls do teach me how i can improve on it ( first time drawing monkeys)



more details will be added



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