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Wa5hwa5h
Wa5hwa5h on Nov 27 '08
Inspired by the horror aesthetic of the 50s and 60s.



A simple, one color belt print FTW.
weirdpoopoobaby
weirdpoopoobaby on Nov 27 '08
Cool - simple but good. I think you should make the blood droplets less perfectly circular.
lilac2
lilac2 on Nov 27 '08
Kind of grosses me out, which is really good if you're going for horror.

Maybe don't make the middle finger nail quite so pointy. It looks kinda odd. And I agree with the person above me about the blood.



Really good!



Ideas on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31622/Love_Fall_Falls_Love#v3

Wa5hwa5h
Wa5hwa5h on Nov 28 '08
thanks guys! I tried a more realistic approach for the blood but it was waay over the top, so I went with a more stylized approach. Is it a dealbreaker? Thanks as always for your comments!
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onetworedandblue
onetworedandblue on Jan 22 '09
So good!

The two upward pointing fingernails are very pointy and a little distracting.

Can't wait to see it on a shirt.
satir
satir on Jan 22 '09
it's great...

but yeah.. make the blood drops less roundish..
AlexPLeith
AlexPLeith on Jan 22 '09
My biggest problem is that there is a line at the end of the wrist almost to say that the wrist ends there. If that is your intention, then that's cool. However, I think that it may be more beneficial to lose that so it looks like the person bleeding is still attached.
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