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Ian Leino on Nov 26 '08 Hmm, seems I hit a hiccup in the critique submission process there.
ANYWAY, after mass public outcry, I added goggles and a couple of extra birds in the background, and then gave the penguin a fan so that he could actually MOVE and not just float in the air. Better? |
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"Penguingenuity"?
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dacat on Nov 26 '08 I think what skilly meant was "Pengenuity"
I don't think the lower parts are needed actually...not much going on down there anyway. Some clouds perhaps? |
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Like the addition of the fan. Preferred the penguin goggle-less, though.
This is an adorable design! |
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dacat on Nov 26 '08 I will say that there are so many "penguin tries to fly" designs, this so far isn't anything that different...might have to add a twist
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wullagaru on Nov 26 '08 what dacat said. it looks great ian its just done a bit too much. maybe have another bird dive bombing it to keep it out of the sky?
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Nah, I did mean Penguingenuity (we might be coming at it from different pronounciations).
1. the quality of being cleverly inventive or resourceful; inventiveness: a designer of great ingenuity. 2. cleverness or skillfulness of conception or design: a device of great ingenuity. 3. an ingenious contrivance or device. |
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dacat on Nov 26 '08 Skilly, I got ya, I was trying to make it less of a tongue-twister :-)
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Great design but can you please change it to transcends. Sorry just hate to see final submissions with spelling mistakes. Also I think clouds or maybe a setting sun or just a sun behind him would add greatly to the design right now it is almost too much blue. Right now 3 or 4 with a little work could be a 5 easily.
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Ian Leino on Dec 02 '08 Thanks rossmat8. I can't change the title in the critiques (stoopid speling errers!), but just subbed the final version, which IS spelled correctly. I also made a few other changes, and added a suggestion of clouds in the background, too. Don't want to post the final version here though, so it will at least be a *little* bit of a surprise.
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aw it's cute! good luck
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this is awesome
i think it is ready for submit |
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looks ready...nice.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/32151/black_eyes |
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It's damned cute.
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it's perfect love it
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oh yeah... dreams come true. Great design and color.
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Also, it is in desperate need of a nice snappy title. If anyone comes up with one that I end up using, I'll send them a $25 GC, so put on your thinking pants or, um.. hats, and come up with something better than my poor attempt.