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v4 A small flightless bird discovers that technology transcents nature, current version








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Ian Leino
   Ian Leino on Nov 26 '08
Hmm, seems I hit a hiccup in the critique submission process there.

ANYWAY, after mass public outcry, I added goggles and a couple of extra birds in the background, and then gave the penguin a fan so that he could actually MOVE and not just float in the air.

Better?
Skilly
Skilly on Nov 26 '08
"Penguingenuity"?
dacat
   dacat on Nov 26 '08
I think what skilly meant was "Pengenuity"

I don't think the lower parts are needed actually...not much going on down there anyway. Some clouds perhaps?

box543
box543 on Nov 26 '08
Like the addition of the fan. Preferred the penguin goggle-less, though.

This is an adorable design!
dacat
   dacat on Nov 26 '08
I will say that there are so many "penguin tries to fly" designs, this so far isn't anything that different...might have to add a twist
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Nov 26 '08
what dacat said. it looks great ian its just done a bit too much. maybe have another bird dive bombing it to keep it out of the sky?
Skilly
Skilly on Nov 26 '08
Nah, I did mean Penguingenuity (we might be coming at it from different pronounciations).

1. the quality of being cleverly inventive or resourceful; inventiveness: a designer of great ingenuity.
2. cleverness or skillfulness of conception or design: a device of great ingenuity.
3. an ingenious contrivance or device.
dacat
   dacat on Nov 26 '08
Skilly, I got ya, I was trying to make it less of a tongue-twister :-)
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rossmat8
rossmat8 on Dec 02 '08
Great design but can you please change it to transcends. Sorry just hate to see final submissions with spelling mistakes. Also I think clouds or maybe a setting sun or just a sun behind him would add greatly to the design right now it is almost too much blue. Right now 3 or 4 with a little work could be a 5 easily.
Ian Leino
   Ian Leino on Dec 02 '08
Thanks rossmat8. I can't change the title in the critiques (stoopid speling errers!), but just subbed the final version, which IS spelled correctly. I also made a few other changes, and added a suggestion of clouds in the background, too. Don't want to post the final version here though, so it will at least be a *little* bit of a surprise.
thewonderblonde
thewonderblonde on Dec 02 '08
this is awesome
i think it is ready for submit
marcodinicola
marcodinicola on Dec 03 '08
looks ready...nice.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/32151/black_eyes



deblee
deblee on Dec 03 '08
It's damned cute.
StevenTu
StevenTu on Dec 03 '08
Very cute :) reminds me of that old nintendo game!

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Marleed
Marleed on Mar 14 '09
it's perfect love it
MKcmyk
MKcmyk on Mar 14 '09
funny ... SUBMIT ...
plz critique my designs ...
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beclick
beclick on Mar 14 '09
MegaMugen
MegaMugen on Mar 14 '09
haha.. cute...

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Brightwood
Brightwood on Mar 14 '09
oh yeah... dreams come true. Great design and color.

got a score for this very critiqued bull?
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