Erm..Hi..This is my first time in the crits....



What I really want to know, is is this too detailed to make a decent tshirt design? Obvioulsly, the colouring is only half done, but the colours are meant to be like the blue & red print you used to get in old comics, its not quite right though. I was going to put a ghost in playing it, sort of transparent where he goes over the rest of the design?

Also, how come the colours change when I upload the artwork? They are much more garish here than the gif on my desktop.

Right, Im uploading a new version of this tomorrow, & when it's all wrong youve only got yourselves to blame!!

Does the guess who board need shading? Can you tell it's a ghost?

I need to know these things!

I like the way you've created the transparent effect with the ghost.



The pieces don't really seem to be a part of the board though. The board is sort of a blob.

I like the idea

THANK YOU! Right, I'll try some halftone shading business. Obviously, me acting on any advice may be hindered by the fact Im not very good!

I like the idea but I have no good suggestions at the moment.

Thanks for the responses!

amusingly amusing and nicely drawn BUT guess who is a two player game, you really need the other ghost imo

Deep down, I knew that was coming. The other ghost dosent bother me as much as the possibility of having to draw another in perspective guess who board. I'll see what I can do....

I am crap & cant do an in perspective board on the other side. Is another ghost facing him enough, or should I just scrap the other ghost & learn to draw better for next time?

Thanks for the response. Im using a confusing combination of pens, ai & ps. This is meant to be for the Horror contest, so time is of the essence, & Ive got another one Im keen to finish! Im going to have a crack at your suggestions now....