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starr226
on Nov 23 '08
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starr226
   starr226 on Nov 23 '08
An idea suggested by Kiiarella - looking to get a feel for it.

Sugegstions, general thoughts, whatnot
pizzawench
pizzawench on Nov 23 '08
Maybe make her a little more hardcore with a little rip in her dress and it hiked up a little?
kiiarella
kiiarella on Nov 23 '08
did you get my e-mail?
BlakeeBoo
BlakeeBoo on Nov 23 '08
Maybe she hands over her wings too?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/31875/White_Rabbit_Movement_I#v3
wallstreet
   wallstreet on Nov 23 '08
I like it the way it is (without the pencil markings of course). :D



If you have the time, please critique. Thanks!
wallstreet
   wallstreet on Nov 23 '08
Oops, the link didn't appear. Here it is:



please critique



Thanks!
starr226
   starr226 on Nov 24 '08
that link doesn't work very well.

any other suggestions?
Skritz
Skritz on Nov 24 '08
Maybe make the Guitar Stand out a little more with a bolder color? Great though....
kiiarella
kiiarella on Nov 25 '08
bump!
Naive
Naive on Nov 25 '08
I agree with Skritz and would suggest red as a color for the guitar. Clean up the pencil lines and submit this bad boy.



get revenge

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31893/Only _Ketchup
sweetheartka
sweetheartka on Nov 25 '08
I like it but angel would be more "hard" :D any rock ornaments or smthg like it
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