Her is an idea for the Horror competition. let me know what you think!

I like where this is going,, The woman's chin needs some work, and I don't know about the snake shape on top.



/I'd still sport it though

Thanks, I will work on that!

Yah, there is something not quite right with the chin, but this does have potential.

thanks! I will give the chin some TLC

Wow; I really like this! I see what everyone's saying about her chin, but her nose is looking sort of flat to me, like a snout, kind of. I'm horrible at drawing faces, so I don't know that I can offer anything constructive. :) I really like how you've drawn the monster/snake/bat things, though!!!

Thanks, i will give the nose some TLC too.

This has a lot of potential, I agree with the comments about the face, you might also try making her look more afraid.



Look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31571/second_thoughts

Love this design.

The ultimate 'bad hair day'!

Agree with the other comments about her chin and nose - Also I would raise her eyebrow slightly and add the other one to make her look more frightened.

Bats / monsters look great.

Thanks everybody for the great critiques so far!



I will work on the eyebrows to make her more terrified.

Really good. I love the composition and style. Very interesting use of halftone dots transitioning to the top. I've not seen that before, I'll have to steel it from you. :P



The face needs work as everyone's said. I was going to do a screaming woman in an idea I had but never did. I did however find this reference on the net. Don't know if it will help but I thought I'd pass it on to see if you can use it.



reference



Great idea, great work, should be even better when you're through.

Thanks Quister!

i like this a lot

i think if you just fix her chin (cause it kinda looks like a double chin)

this would be perfect...

I like the design... Maybe it would be nice to make it in a pop-art way like lichtenstein's artworks...



http://www.threadless.com/critique/31714/koi_carp

Thanks for all the help so far!

it's an improvement from v1

I personally think the background's uncalled for (it doesn't speak in the same language as the rest of the design)



good luck and check out my critique!

Good work on the face, love the shadowing. Maybe a lighter dilated iris to accent the pupil to add scare in the eyes. scared eyes



I personally like the white dot pattern midway on the shirt, very unique and supports the idea of hair transitioning into demons.



I think you might lose the black indents on her right hand and the pinky outline on her left hand. Too much detail maybe. I think smooth would look better without any loss of definition. Her left shoulder (black outline) could be a bit rounder as well. The two grey hairs above her right hand look off color with the rest and it's the only place you have grey, not worth an extra color, I think. Also, the red in the two snake's eyes, cyclops mouth, devil's nose, and monster profile's mouth are a different red than the shirt color coming through the other demon's eyes and teeth, maybe you filled in when you meant to leave them empty?



Anyway, just nit stuff, easy to fix. Looking very cool, excellent design, and looks great on the shirt.

Tone down the lightness of her right hand. It detracts from her face which is far more important to the design.

You could even eliminate the hand completely.

Show the whites of her eyes more.

Wow, this is looking great! You might want to add some of the shadow tones to the creases of the palm that's showing. It seems much flatter then the rest of the piece.

thanks everybody, great suggestions!

Thanks for all the great advice so far.

Yeah i like it!

Thanks!

thats hot

I think maybe it starts a little too low on the shirt, if you could add more to the girl and have the ghosts sit higher on the chest it might work better.



also Im not sure i understand that orange band thats going through the middle..

thanks Danielle, I will play around with it.

very nice, i think the orange band is the weak spot of the design, if it's not essential try to see how it works without it



http://www.threadless.com/critique/31983/let_our_powers_COMBINE#lastcomment

wonderful! Great concept, beautifully rendered. Sub away, $5 from me when it gets there.

Thanks for all your help Quister!

Alright, I think this may be that last version!

Thanks for all the amazing advice. Let me know if you have any more suggestions.

1 more...just to try it this way, ditch the hatching, see if it's better.

this is nice! I love how her hair turns into the demons. This is indeed better than the other versions. Its simpler and I like the solid background better as well.



return the love?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/32014/Creation_or_Evolution

I keep looking at it with and without the hatch on the monsters and I can't decide...

I like it

thanks everybody!

i like the hatching of the demons, but it is in a different style to the girl. could you try colouring her in a similar fashion? i dunno - i think her flesh seems a bit too clean/real compared with the above part.



also - the hair that's not flowing up like the main swept up part (the strands straggling nearer her face) are taking away from the flow of your design.



sweetass design tho' dude!

Great idea. Like how the hair changes to demons. very unique