I'm a big fan of simplicity, but does anyone have any suggestions on what might help this design?

It's wonderfu art work , I like it . Theme is very good, Jazz is simply music with high emotions . This is simply art work with

big emotional story

I like the art, but perhaps it's a bit too big on the T? Maybe half the size?

Yeah, I agree on the sizing

ok, so i redrew the drum, added some record sleeves, and scaled down the size of the design on the shirt. thoughts?

hmm, i'll try that and see how it looks. thanks

It is great work , GO JAZZ . I think you should write some jazz text

I like the addition of the sleeves, you could have some fun with title-ing them, a la "Square Jive" and all that jazz-speak.

adjusted the layout. I like it much better. Changed the album title to "swingin sounds"

Good Work , But I think you should keep ,,Jazz sound ,,

I sent it through. thanks for all the feedback!