My design is an island designed for reclining tv watchers.

Nice idea.

I'd like to see where you are going to place it.



Please have a look at mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31233/How_to_Make_Faces

It reminds me very much of that printed design that was the highest score ever, but was revealed to be stolen. The island is a fish and a man is fishing from the side of the island.

this is really cool, i love the concept and the illustration of it.



i think placement would be cool if its closer to the bottom, but still close to middle.

Awesome, maybe the propellor could be tweaked a bit, it looks almost like Charlie Chaplin's legs sticking out the side, if you can see what I mean....and the bubbles could be more transparent, rather than totally filled-in?

Cool design, I like it. I agree, the propeller might need a little tweaking.

Any more comments, I decided to get back to doing this, and would like to see if there are any new thoughts.

Mostly just tweaking for detail, sir. the prop, the tree needs highlights or leaver or something. I'd redo the dish. This is an awesome idea.



Send me a crit?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43227/Until_Cooler_Heads_Prevail

Very cool idea. To me it would make a great T but judging from my ratings what do I know. I would buy it....

Any other comments before I make alterations.

maybe use the light green to fill in the left side of the tree trunk....

does it need a person? or is it an advertisement for this?

i agree that the propellors need more definition, have you tried it with an outboard motor on the back instead?



what do you think of mine?

bump

Updated a few things. Mostly minor changes.

Still love it as it is. I'd buy it in a second. Just a really nice feel to the graphic and the colors as spot on. Now lets see it on a real T.

very nice and simple. I'like it.



please crit this and this. thanks

Ok then, is placement, color and size good?



I like the grey the best for the shirt.

:D i like

grey is good

like the idea



http://www.threadless.com/critique/43548/Barcode ?

I still like the light blue better T better but I'd still buy the T. Great design.

Design on blue tee.

haha cool... but i need to see more detail or activities on that island :).

Good work!



a little help please for my designs :D



http://www.threadless.com/critique/46993/Princess_and_the_Frog



and



http://www.threadless.com/critique/43381/Bully#v3



thx

On Light Blue(which is different than V4's blue), Heather Grey(same as v3), and Sand.



I think these are the best colors for the shirt.



Also, unless you guys give me a solid reason to add something, I'm prepared to keep the design like it is in V2 and these.

I think tat this actually works on all 3 shirt colours but i prefer the beige. You could try a dark blue and jsut change the water to a light blue. jsut a suggestion. but this is reallz fun.. oo waht about movig it up a bit on the shirt. I think this is pretty much ready for submission though. Well done A+




Could you vote for my design 1



Could you vote for my design 2

I do like the beige(sand) shirt color the best. Should I just do the beige then. Or can I submit with three shirt colors.

I like very much the idea and the style. to me it's nearly perfect.

and... oh my god... V1 is 220 days old... i think it's time to submit!



comment mine

I actually started this design in like... 2007. I deleted that one and re-uploaded it for critique last Nov.



Should I just submit it like this though, or with the full Sand shirt, or maybe on somebody.

Sand T-shirt.



Submit?

Yes. It looks better on sand. How about drawing a fat guy, with a beer in his hand sitting on the sofa?



Could you check out mine please? Thank you

Looks good, but not sure about the second blue line on the right, it seems to confuse whether this should be viewed in profile, or more of a 3/4 view, if you know what I mean?

Any other suggestions? I'll play around with adding a person.



The second line on the right is supposed to represent that the island is separating the water as it moves, and if that's too confusing for everyone, I'll consider changing it.

def change the second line and add a person



http://www.threadless.com/profile/955727/Kim456/blog/473661/I_like_blowing_bubbles

oops



I would appreciate your feedback

I love it! I think you've got a winner here. But I totally agree there should be a guy w/ a beer in the chair.

GREAT ! SUBMIT!

woww, it looks great, ready to sub... what about a dude swiming at the back, trying to reach the island... and a coconut falling trying to defend the island, or something like that =P



can you please critique mine?



emonalisa





color zebra

kewl idea, i wud try with some fish and/or stars..

add the dude, remove the line.



does it look cool with a gold sun top left or right?

Cool idea!

As for that line, I would say remove it at the very least. If you're up for some more work make a bulge right behind the boat/island with a slope downward on the right side, then draw some more turbulent water behind the propeller... but you're probably going for the more relaxed look...



Check mine out?

Urban Piracy

I'd make the placement higher. Cool idea though.

Very cool idea... I'd suggest removing the line and making the single remaining line rippled some, to show that it's moving.



I'm impartial about the guy at the moment, but would like to see how it looks... also think it would be good to show this on a real tee when it comes time to sub.

Great idea. Looks good. Maybe just a little more contrast between the two greens. Also liked the fat guy in the chair idea.



It'd be great if you could critique the latest version of my design - Never mind the tigers...

wow, that's the island from my dreams, very nice!

Interesting idea. Tropical sunshine, tv and beer on a moving island. hahah. great



Mind if you critique my design for me please: Terra Micro

Added the guy, and changed the water line.



I like the sand color for the shirt, but the tan color of the guy might make him hard to see. I could make him the same green as the island to match, but it might be hard to see him as well.



Thoughts?

I think the guy should be the same tone as the chair, tv, and palm tree, so he pops out more.

Same as v7 but with green guy.

i like this, but i think the guy blends in too much now, i like version six, but maybe a different color for the man---maybe even a dark grey or black, or red. something to contrast

Any other thoughts?

Hehe. Nice work. IMO, I'd like to see some different colors, or it applied to a few different colored shirts.



Any feedback is much appreciated:



I Love the Rain

Sad Clowns Are Funny

I have some different shirt color options in v5, but I liked the Sand color the best.



Does anyone else think the guy needs to be a different color. I do kind of like him as green, but I think yellow or red might work. I could try a few color schemes out and then post them all in one.

I like it. nice use of visual elements. Maybe it would be stronger if you could make out more of the person in the chair.



Fun

Ok, some different color options for the guy.



Red, Yellow, White, Black, Green, Tan.

I like the green version best, I think others stick out too much.

Style and idea are excellent, I'd keep it "2-coloured" and submit it :)



If you have time, please check out my design.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58668/THE_Shadow .

I do like it with green.



Anyone else have thoughts?

I like the red. Awesome design.

go with green and it's ready to sub!

Thanks so far, but I'd really like some more feedback.



I'm really leaning towards Green.

Ok. I've decided I want to have it with the Green. I think the guy blending in really works better overall for the composition. I like that it's simple with only the 4 colors, and it keeps the colors separate better wit hte guy blending in as well.

I really like it alot, i would vote it a 4. Submit!



would you check mine out?

Gramophoning 101



- Jrlandshark

this is a great idea but it needs some definition. Maybe add some more contrast to the shades of green that you have on the top. the dark green looks too prominent and kinda blends in with the other green.

I also think you should make the little motor more prominent so that it's obvious, the bubble should also be larger.



hope this helps, please vote on my slogans:

http://www.threadless.com/profile/372949/BandB/slogans

that's it... nice



see my critiques

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58215/Space_creature

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58496/Wounded_bird