Loves horror idea and of course, this was inspired by the Alfred Hitchcock film Psycho. Comments would be much appreciated! :)

I really like this one. The arm looks a bit awkward - I don't know exactly why but seems off in a way.

Yeah, this was a quick mock up of an idea..look at it like a sketch... I was just wondering if I should pursue this idea? Also if you couldn't tell, I wanted this to look as if the person stabbing was being cast shadowed onto your shirt, as if you're the victim.

Yeah I like this idea - I figured it was gonna changed some since it's a V.1 but it's a cool idea... and recognizable since I immediately knew it was inspired by Psycho... Since you're a seasoned vet on threadless I was wondering if you could take a look at my first ever submission and makes some comments? http://www.threadless.com/critique/31506/Don_t_Talk_To_Strangers

Really cool idea! I can't wait to see what evolves from this!!

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that halftone definitely gives it a through-the-shower-curtain look. maybe play that up a little more.

good idea!!! try place to back?!

I was thinking about placing this design on the back, but it might make for a lame front?

I'm working on a new version now, so please stay tuned. :)

I think the drawing's great, and I love molotkoff's suggestion of putting it on the back--it would make it 200% creepier. Otherwise, change nothing.

I agree about making it creepier if I put it on the back, I will totally try that with the next version. Thanks a lot to everyone for the comments! :)

Changed the placement and fixed the characters shadow.

Should I add more torso?

Perhaps stretched a little too far around the side?

haha this is a funny idea

something is weird about his arm. his hand too small maybe?

i love love love this idea though. :)

kinda looks like he is holding a bird (or has a bird as a hand) or something. good idea, but the hand/knife need to be more clear.

Lifted the character up a bit on the t-shirt placement. As for the hand looking weird and small, I think it would be correct since it would be a foreshortened cast shadow...? I used photo reference if that makes a difference, but I might have to illustrate the hand to make it more pronounced?

Haha yes! his back placement is awesome.....I dunno, maybe a little puncture wound on the front, so's that it isn't left totally blank? I likee muchee.

Horror is scary. Wolves are scary? Anyone fancy un petit peu de critique, head on down to http://www.threadless.com/critique/31513/Mod_Wolves yespleeze....

Ya, this is cool and very fitting for the competition! Skilly has a great suggestion with a lil' something on the front??

This shirt is f**king amazing. It's the first of it's kind to me, I would've never thought of that.....-_- But I would get this shirt just to creep somebody out lol or to tell me what a cool shirt I got.Maybe make a different postion glow in the dark so it looks like he moved when you turn the light off.

Crit mine too plz.

Great idea, and really well executed. For submission, I would make the image of the design a little bigger, just so we can see the detail in the outline.

winner.

Thanks, I'll put together the final presentation now and show a detailed illustration on tab. As for the front of the shirt, I feel as if I put anything on it, it might seem cheesy looking...

ha ha, this is great!

I'm now in the process of finishing up this design, any last minute comments before I submit? Thanks to everyone who has participated in my critique! :)

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It remains fabulous--make it happen.

You can now vote for this sub here!

Thanks Fourcolours for the advice!

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i want to buy this already

awsome!!

Thanks, please vote for it here.

:)