I've been a Hitchcock fan for some time. This design has some inspiration, but I put in my own twist. Simple design in one color. Let me know what you think. Thanks!

Any suggestions? Tee color preferences?

Anyone?

My original is horizontal, it will be a much smaller design altogether. Let me set one up. Thanks!

I added the blood splatter. The lettering "Ouch," pay back indeed hurts. edited the positioning of design to different tee colors, and changed the middle design birds in perspective flying in.

Should the design be center only?

It might work with that bit over the sleeve, because even wearing it, the guy is running... creates some mystery not knowing from what... they're coming... the birds are trying to tear him up... and boom. Pay back!

Any more suggestions?

maybe if you had the man running on the bottom left corner, and then have the birds come from the back of the shirt?

i really really dig this.

but the way the running guy is placed, i think it may be too much in the armpit, and weird on the sleeve.

as networkosaka said, you could have A LOT of birds on the back and have some flying around to the font chasing him. maybe have them come at him from over the shoulder?



all that aside, i love this design.

Front side, man running... added some clouds and landscape to give a bit of depth...



Back side of tee, middle and end of story... I used gradient so that the design does cross from one side to the other, being too large to print.

Most likely that I'll present this in flash to be able to show each part at a larger scale.

Awesome, I like very much. Maybe just have a bit of a shadow for the running man, since the other two dudes have one?

Oops, upon looking through the other versions, it seems he does have a shadow, so maybe bring it down a bit? I dunno, given where it is currently, to me it looks like he's running with his knees to the ground. If i were further below him, to show he's not touching the ground, it might look more natural?



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The shadow is there, but looks faded... I agree. I'll put the shadow down so it looks like he is running. Thanks!