This is a work in progress, that needs a lot.

Please tell me what you all think.

i love how the traffic flows and its basic. i love the idea that a car is built off of one line. i suggest trying things with different positions with the bikes . maybe put some environmental factors into it like smog clouds and maybe some form of showing that trees cant save the world alone. really make these bikers our role models. maybe try a abstract city. i suggest try some positioning on shirts to get a feel of how it would fit and shape and wrap around or something. theres tons of things you can try with this. maybe if you have a chance it you live near a big city or have the opportunity to see one up close go there and take it all in.

I think the closest edge of the path (the cars) needs to be 'flatter', like rotated or skewed more anti-clockwise. Maybe only by about 10 degrees but i think it'd make the design work better.

1) I love the drawing.

2) Are the bicycles meant to be flying?

3) No offense to lisera, but it always bothers me when commentators make suggestions that basically come down to: "Here's how I suggest you change YOUR design so that it better reflects MY interpretation of it..." I mean, is there anything in this design that implicitly suggests it's ABOUT environmentalism, or "that trees can't save the world alone"?

Great shape and flow, as long as you make sure the cyclist have transparencies in the right places (as I'm sure you will), it shouldbe good.

Woah lets try to not say things about others on here okay. This is a community of people that all have a similar interest not a place to fight. You know this is a place where we can discuss things and i am sure lisera was just giving some input maybe what she saw was different than your idea fourcolours. If we do not like others ideas and have nothing to say nice about others we will just keep it to ourselves. You said no offense but if it was me i would take a lot of offense to what you just said to her. Not too mention you gave you gave your suggestions just like her.



On another note great picture. I can't wait to see in the submissions.

i really like this concept.

i like it so far. I think the first biker (biggest one) looks to be placed oddly. I would maybe try tilting the second (center) biker to the right instead of left.

thanks everyone!

right now it is all a bit odd, but I'll grab all of your suggestions and fix it up. Thanks :)

I would like the cars to be less tilted. I like the flow of them, though.

I also had to stare awhile to see that the bicyclists weren't flying. Maybe have them interspersed with the traffic as though they were on the road too (although in real life they would die a horrible, flat, death). The closest one could be to the left of the cars.

Well done so far!