Crit please !

I like it! I think the guy mowing could be refined a bit more, but really funny and good placement.

thanks dude.

I will reworking all piece. It's just rough sketch.

neat idea!

thanks Marco :)

anyone more?

Funny stuff! I really like your choice for the placement.

this is totally cool, and I really like the placement. I think the drawing needs to be cleaner, and the mower more detailed and distinct. Also I think it would be cool if his hair was dyed green. But this is a really good idea.

if you have time:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/184859/At_Sea

Thanks a lot, guys!

I think it's great! I'd submit it the way it is=)

Check out mine please! Would appreciate any feedback.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/31317/Don_t_Play_With_Fire

Thanks lse

anyone more?

yup placement is good, would like to see the cleaned up version!

return the love?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/31369/Love_Machine_formerly_Making_Love

thanks :)

I like it as well.

I agree on the bit about the hair being green.

And could it be nice if the person mowing was pushing the mower uphill or somehow following the shape of the head with his/her feet. Just because it looks a little like he/she is standing in the air.

Looking forward to seeing what it looks like when reworked!

Could you please look at mine?:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/31233/How_to_Make_Faces

Thanks

Kudos on the placement, don't go changing that, but yeah, mini-punk could use a bit of cleaning up mayhaps.

nice start, the dudes eyes look kinda close together...real good idea

check mine out
critique!

Thanks :)

Cool idea but
i would clean up the sketchiness or do vector line artwork...

critque me please!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/31432/Scary_Mary

Yes I would

I dig the sketch style!

thanks

love the sketch...

I really like this. I"m saying what others are too- submit!

crit mine please?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/26536/Dance

yup, very nice idea, i'd love to see that on a shirt! :D

man i love this -submit this and i buy it!!@!
chek me out when you have time thank you!!!! :)