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critique me up scotty!

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I definitely wear this. My only issue is the color of the shirt. I'd love to see it on blue or grey ^_^

lol "I'd" definitely wear it.

I like the idea, but there are a few changes you should definetly make to it. It looks like all the clouds and buildings are floating in space in front of the raindrop. I think changing the outline of the drop would start to fix this problem. Moving around the clouds so they give more of an impression of depth would also help.



It'd probably help to add more detail as well.

thanks for the critique thus far..

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I'll try and work on this when I get home.

BlametheSuburbs is right about depth helping a little bit.



It's a cute idea, and I like the colors you chose.

Brace yourselves.........

Hope you like this version better. I'd still like some more critique before I concider submitting this.

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C'mon guys.

Take a look at a shot of earth from space: the image is really distorted as you get near the edges.

Yeah, I'm still tryin to get the city to look right.

whacha think? for the love of god please say something!!!!!!

The big bright blue blob in the middle of the green T is what is throwing me... maybe make it a different shade of blue so it blends better?



I really like the rest. Prefer the volcano to have some lava.

And I like the colour of the clouds better in V1, though later versions have better shape to the clouds. The ring cloud in V3 is a good addition.

travioli, if the drop is of a somewhat spherical shape and the clouds are assumed to be equally dispersed across the whole drop, the around the edges the clouds would be much much denser than in the center. There would be more information in general the further toward the edge of the object you got.

V2 is my favorite, except the white outline along the main water drop is irritating me.

I dig the lava, though. Awesome concept, btw.

Cute!

the perspective on the volcano is weird. It seems like it's past the turning edge of the drop, so it should be either directly facing the viewer or turned down.

suburbs, can you please clarify your previous statement? I'd really like to know what needs to be fixed.

Hope the perspectives work a little better, & the blue is not too blue.

Gah! I just looked at version one. That thing is gross.

lol yeah you've improved a lot since then.

do you have to have the white outline around the raindrop?

this reminds me of one of my critiques. a lot.

what would you prefer instead?

Damn it icebar! I tested it out.



Hold on...............

Everybody, please vote on whether or not you like it without a border!!!!!

i like that better

maybe a different shirt color though...

idk, it blends in more now.

What would work besides green?

light blue or light green or...

make the raindrop a little more blue than green and see what happens?

ok well here is what i have to say about this one, i think it would be better if you moved it to the side a little you know like the top left side of the chest or something, and as fot the green, it is ok, but one of that main things i don't like is that theere are too many mountains in my opintion and i think the outline is better oh and i dunno maybe you should use an olive sort of color shirt, well that shade of green more :) i dunno but keep it up :)

yes, too many mountains and the change from gray to green over there looks weird.

I just figured out that it looks pretty good on brown. And i'll see how it looks on olive.

help me with my recent critique?

m'k

Seriously, vote!!!!!!! 1 is for, 1 is against.

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no outline.

oh so helpful. :)

With, but thinner. Maybe a 2 or 3 pixel?

It's awesome. Love the idea. I think with as it doesn't stand out as much without, especially on the green tee

thanx

Without. And please, please stop bumping.

bump

That's just spiteful.

sorry that I offended you.

I never said it was offensive, just spiteful. People will see your crit, you don't have to comment "." every few hours to make sure.

actually people don't see things if you don't bump them.

I'm still working on gettting a good smaller outline but... Do you think it looks better on olive?

um yes, better on olive

i think it looks great. v6 should be subbed :D

Ok, I think I'm going to submit this version. This one's got an extremely thin line so that it wil be more distinguishable on the greener shirt.

hmm it gives it a different feel.. but i guess so

The vast majority wanted an outline. so i decided to compromise.

i love this one ! =]

ok but you didn't take ppls advice such as reducing the number of mountains..

Nice work. Maybe try adding some ships and whales and shit?

less mountains, and more shading on the landmasses to show orientation. Some of them still look like they're floating.