This is sort of a fan art thing. Looking for critiques.

The rendering style is very good! How was it made?

I made it with some techniques used in matte and digital painting. I used a wacom tablet.

I hate to be one of those people begging for critiques, but please! Im begging you, please critique!

I am very intrigued by this. I'm not sure how it would do scoring. I know I wouldn't wear it, but I'd like to see other designs with different subject matter rendered in a similar fashion.

too many colors? read thru the submission packet again... they allow 8 colors (and that includes different saturation of the same hue...)



check me out:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31173/stomped_on

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29529/i_have_beef_with_you

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29526/find_one_another

Well, this would be printed with simulated process, so I can have as many colours as I want?

Ho-hum. Nobody wants to critique this... I guess its ready then?

For me, the TV takes up a bit more space. I would prefer it, either with no TV and Mario having a beer-can with maybe a mushroom logo on it or maybe the TV stays there and Mario has fallen asleep playing the old Nintendo. Smaller TV, with Nintendo on shelf under it and controller in Mario's hand.



Hmm. I hope that gives you something and doesn't just seem like stupid rambling.



If you have time, please look at mine:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/31186/under_construction

I came past this twice and didn't say anything because I couldn't think of anything to say. I thought I'd wait until someone said something so I could have a light dawn. But the light never dawned.

I don't know what it means and I wouldn't wear it.

You have the skill to do something really good.

Sorry, I mean a bit too much space. I've been working 14 hours and i'm very tired.

Ah ha! I didn't get the Mario reference until the post concurrent with mine.