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bennyd302 on Nov 11 '08 Added the horse, what do you think? thanks everyone!
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great illustration. I like the horse. I would like it better - i think - if both the horse and the skull/longhorns were not touching the main dude, like the rest of the background images.
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Hrmm, not bad, I think I'd like to see how it's placed on a shirt. I assume center mass chest region but still :P
That said, lower right corner of the piece seems empty and the horse's neck seems a little slender, but this a really good start. I dig the colours. |
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empiricist on Nov 11 '08 Maybe try adding more of the sheriffs torso, but nice style
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bennyd302 on Nov 13 '08 yikes, its doing worse than it did before....this is disapointing
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I think the horse is pulling attention away from the word balloon. maybe that's why it's not doing as well.
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whirzle1 on Nov 14 '08 I'd like to maybe see the torso with his hands kinda on his hips (in a manly, new-sheriff way...not a sassy, oh-no-you-didn't sort of way)
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this is a start of a really awesome illo/tshirt. I would agree that the right side could use a little more "stuff" to balance is out a little more... maybe a Zippo and some more of the card suits?
would like to see it placed on a shirt. PS. don't be disappointed, this is a great illo/shirt! |
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...also... is it me, or would these colors look really awesome on a Cream shirt instead of Sand?
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bennyd302 on Nov 16 '08 thanks for the helpful advice, definitely going to be making some changes
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