Another Idea for a shirt

Funny enough

I drew this up in detention

=P



CRITIQUE~!

I tried a mock up for the shirt design



I still need tips on how to improve

i.e. Colours, Background, whatnot



CRITIQUE~!

its cool. i woldnt really know what to change or do. maybe just add some more colours like shading.

Cool building. I agree with ^ that it needs a little shading. Maybe adding some depth to the backround as well (instead of just the two clouds). you could do something like add a silhouette of a cityscape in the back, or give more varying depth with clouds.



if you have time:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/184859/At_Sea/

okay

I just might do that

=D

I thinkk it'd be cool if you made it bigger and start it from the bottom of the t and make it come up maybe to the chest but it's a really cool idea.

i think you nailed it, even with the colours. i like the roughness of it, would wear it. if anything, the presentation could be better.

Love the style and great color choices.



Maybe the sharpness of the bottom is not the best choice - what if the buildings were emerging from another cloud?



or something else to make the design seem more infinite

nice style and colours too...you should think about removing the sharpness of the bottom,maybe it all could emerge from a tiny hole...just an idea.

please:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/32151/black_eyes

i like it but not the colors too much.. like the yellow D;



Terror of Death...? [click]

You're Such a Loser [click]

Autumn Love [click]

Winter is Coming [click]

Sakura [click]

perhaps something aside from clouds could be in the sky... air balloon? air plane (could hold bad connotations though)? birds? maybe a stunt plane with a banner? and potentially one of the above ideas of either having the buildings emerge from a cloud or from a hole... maybe make it an exclamation point?



all just ideas... perhaps its actually better without any of them, i don't know... its a good design i think its very good... good colors... if you are looking for color variation maybe an orange on a navy shirt? i like the colors you chose already a lot though as well.



could you help with my design, hippy curls?

make some cars wayy down in the background?? Looking really good btw :)



Please help me decide whether I should pursue this or not.