still have a lot of work to do, just an initial sketch

is this for the loves horror comp?

pretty cool, reminds me of the grudge/the ring. I think it will definatley look cool once cleaned a bit, but i think try and keep the sketchy look.

Can you check out mine if can?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31041/Inside_Man

oh nice, love t-shirts that start up with sketches, i say go to the next stage!

I think it's good, but you might want to work on the size of the hand a little bit in the final version. Keep in mind your hand is usually the length of your face. :)

thanks, yeah i realized the hand was much too small after finishing this sketch

Nice textures though, good luck with it. :)

Are you going to have whatever the person is looking at in view?

I think she's looking at... whatever is on the outside of the shirt. At least, that's what I thought the intention was.

i like it, hand drawn, keep that look and it'll end up good.





any comments or anything would be appreciated!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/184412/noob_mixtape

looks nice

The fingers are great!

With the right coloring and time this would be awesome for the new theme

still working on the wrinkles...not really liking the way they look right now

lol, i like it a lot.

those fingernails are disgusting.

your hand drawn work is more compelling than the vectorized tie and folds in the shirt - they have good form, but I'd like to see them in a similar style as the girl. I love the eye.

I get the feeling, nice line works!thanks for commenting too.

I like it .... it's nice

(especially the winkles and nails ... )

but are you going to have a girl version ??

reminds me of the grudge... i hated the grudge...

I like your work ...



any comments or anything would be appreciated!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31740/High_Heels

freaky idea, though I'm not diggin' the shape of the creeps fingers, they don't look right. It's like they are too bent. I love the expression on his face though.



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thanks for the comments, i think im gonna take another run at the hands, and while i'm at it, hand draw the tie and shirt and see what it looks like

added more detail to the tie, i think its coming along

just submitted this, thanks for the comments

i really like this design, i just don't like the buttos, i think it only should have the cases not the buttons



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