This is a re-design of my very first submission.

I like this one a bit better actually, but I think you need to go back to the thick-thin linework look

this looks really nice! i think there needs to be something showing the motion of the balls flying around? Love the scales!

good ideas thanks!

i like the thin lines, but they look a little shaky

maybe a bit more consistency w/ the shadows, and maybe the balls can get some shadows too? i like this a lot and wish i knew more about design to help you kick it up a notch.

Thanks, that helps :)

Made a few changes... Thanks for the help so far!

This is really nice, and I love the textures.



But that knotted section is bothering me. It doesn't really make sense as a knot. The piece that comes toward the head comes from the left of the knot, but it needs to come from the right for the knot to work. I'm probably just be picky! Still great job!



Comment on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31094/Funkynatomy

Thanks a bunch!