Again, need to edit out the colors. Besides that, any comments/suggestions?

I don't get it, but I don't think I'm supposed to...

Visually very interesting. Im trying to decide whether or not Id want that on a shirt. Seems a little grotesque for that size. I almost think it would be funnier if they weren't smoking at all, but just gazing insanely (the trippy background suggests they may not be "all there")

Alright, thanks, I'll tweak it and see what I come up with.

Way cool!