This is a for the 'You Never Forget Your First' redesign challenge.

You can check out my first design in my profile. I wanted to illustrate in an imaginative way how, if you read a book it may save your life.

on white

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the colors are really bright on white........

Maybe the design does not need to be this big. It's a rather big block of colour like this.

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hehe, you're right... I thought it would look good on yellow but that doesn't look much better. Here comes silver...

I emailed you, because I couldnt put my idea into words

what about a light blue shirt with some clouds behind the book and some action lines swooping up as if the book has just taken flight



this is so different than the blog version

Thanks you two! I know it's a lot different from the other one, i just thought going in this direction would be better. I think i'll do another option in more of a comic book style with a header or something like BOOKS SAVE LIVES or BOOK SAVES LIFE

I like the idea Eric. I think the presentation needs a bit more "plump."



I try exploring blues, and red... different t colors to see what works best. I know a lot of people at Threadless don't like white tees, this design looks okay in white, but you may have a better option in color.

Thanks eladear, the colors are a bit off after i save it for web, so i'm going to experiment so more with that. also with a headline...

idea can be cool as i imagine it like this, no need for the logo of superman,

u can just use a book who flies sity and fights ignorance maybe? and hes liek shooting math or watevrrr knowledge u want at pll who resembles ignorance maybe or sth like this,, stupidity then u have alll the elemnts of design story ,, a funny line,, a creative flick so i think this all i can think of its alot but thsi is how i imagine it wish it helps and check my new v4 or king cock thanks!!

haha, little late but thanks anyways!