I like the idea of letting the drawing speak for itself. The drawing is very well done and has an artistic ans emotional statement of its own. It doesn't need more than people's appreciation.
Thanks for the comments. Not sure which way to go with this yet. The design in itself is supposed to use white space to create endings of the design. Yet, I'll review comments to see what is the best option.
I love your drawing, I hope that you changed it a little bit from the magazine photo. I think this would work better if you had her on the left side of the T-shirt with maybe something in the background.