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v1 The Puppets Revenge, current version








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Omerican
   Omerican on Oct 27 '08
Down with the man! Don't let your brain get washed.. We will not be controlled!



let me know what you think of the colors, placement and background. Does that noise I added in the background help or hurt the design?
Omerican
   Omerican on Oct 27 '08
(will work for comments)
garciagirl
garciagirl on Oct 27 '08
Wow! Very nice. I think the background hurts more than it helps. The drawing can stand on its own!
KDLIG
   KDLIG on Oct 27 '08
so nice, sub it!
lefameux
lefameux on Oct 27 '08
Very nice, and cool idea too. I don't think it needs the background though.
Ghee
Ghee on Oct 27 '08
Hot Shit!

COOL! submit.

Please "crit" my new version.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30599/Extinct

charlieangel
charlieangel on Oct 27 '08
cool!
wotto
   wotto on Oct 27 '08
awesome
BootsBoots
BootsBoots on Oct 27 '08
I love this one.
puffyhair
puffyhair on Oct 27 '08
like the noise, like the design, submit!
jonojonas
jonojonas on Oct 27 '08
I love this, but I do agree with garciagirl in that you don't need the background. The main image is bold enough to stand on it's own.

Great job, hope it does well! :)
puffyhair
puffyhair on Oct 28 '08
I like the noise. It would be boring with out it. It gives it depth.
1MIKO
1MIKO on Oct 28 '08
It will become a tee.

Sure!
Spieliewielie
Spieliewielie on Oct 28 '08
I love it! Can you maybe give some other shirt color options? I hate yellow, but I would totally wear this on cream or olive.



The pinochio is really cute. Your characterdesign is done really well. It's how I'd imagine it. It has resambles of the Disney characters, but it's different enough to not get in trouble due parody and shit. The usage of the light purple really does it for me here. It's the perfect color to brighten the browns up.



I can't decide weither I like the background or not.



You've got a sub from me.



Check out my designs and critiques;

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The Wish Machine
-Eskimo-
-Eskimo- on Oct 28 '08
print....right...now...

its so sick man!



can you check mine out?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/30766/Hold_Me
TheMunchy
TheMunchy on Oct 28 '08
submit it. its awesome
PoshOne.be
PoshOne.be on Oct 28 '08
Very nice! Lose the background and all the noise around it and it's a winner winner, chicken dinner!
Gaby G
Gaby G on Oct 28 '08
I like the background, I think you should keep it, I guess the only thing that's bugging me a little is the size of the guy he looks a little bit too big, if you shrink it down just a bit it would be perfect!



If you have a second please check out mine:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/30756/KISS_THIS
6 days later
Resistance
   Resistance on Nov 04 '08
If you don't submit this, I will find you and slap you. Seriously, it is THAT good.



Thanks for your comments on Ancient Birds... I submitted it... Come vote!!
lucyisaturtle
lucyisaturtle on Nov 04 '08
i love it, its freaking awesome, but i agree that you should try it on a different colour, maybe brown? its definatley a winner!



Can you check mine if you have the time? haha, i rhyme

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31041/Inside_Man
wheresmycookie
wheresmycookie on Nov 04 '08
maybe it's just me but i think you might have missed a finger on his right hand?

try a different colour shirt!! im bias towards black..

i really can't decide whether the background is a + or a -

but radtastic shirt! i'd wear it.
Nocti.luca
Nocti.luca on Nov 04 '08
I like it! Great design!



Can you check mine? :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31029/Peacock
charlieangel
charlieangel on Nov 04 '08
This is very nice!!!!
perliegurl
perliegurl on Nov 05 '08
i like the background but maybe not for this design. there's so much beautiful detail in the man that the background distracts more than it helps. hope that helps!



let me know what you think of mine! http://www.threadless.com/critique/30992/Russian_Dolls

williamtaft
williamtaft on Nov 05 '08
awesome, definitely sub.
etchings13
etchings13 on Nov 05 '08
i like it without the background

The Paper Crane
   The Paper Crane on Nov 06 '08
This is great, only I am not sure of the colours used
choc_tpot
choc_tpot on Nov 06 '08
Great idea. As others have said, I'm not sure about the colors though. I think the background could work but maybe not so much of it?



Comment on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31094/Funkynatomy
Francesa
Francesa on Nov 06 '08
Background - yes! Whatever the final color of the tee is, make the ground similar so it doesn't distract from the main design. But it does add depth.
Omerican
   Omerican on Nov 08 '08
thanks to everyone who commented! the design is now in the running! if you liked it, please vote!



http://www.threadless.com/submission/184533/The_Puppets_Revenge/showmore,designs
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