An idea I quickly sketched. Has it been done before? my very fast search told me no but you threadlessians have the real knowledge.

Should I take it further?

This scenario has been done before. Enter "seesaw accident" in Google Images.

I know- its one of the oldest jokes there is. Has anyone developed it exactly like this before though? Or done it on threadless?

Not that ive seen.

Pretty cool.

Keep going with it imo.



Crit mine plz:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30578/Optical_Illusions

Had an idea today so,

Next version coming up----

Big monster on left with mouth wide open looking up, with little kid being flipped over into its mouth, instead of going straight up.

Look out for it- probably next week when I have time.

A new sketch of my developed idea. Im thinking of putting this in for the horror comp- with a title like "playground predator" or "playing with food"



What do you think?

playground predator sounds a bit wrong

Ahaha @ smiley face on the teeter totter

Maybe have a mother scolding him not to play with his food.

I like this take better.. brilliant hehe

what's the bits on the ground?

nice concept. It still needs some good pop colors. Do you have a plan for what colored shirt you will put it on?



Come check out my Critique of my design Called ISH. Thanks.

The bits on the ground are supposed to be little shoes- it'll be clearer when I've worked on it.

And I like the joke around the title playground predator.



sweet, I'll do a colour version now then.

not bad lets soo coloring!!!

good luck,,, waiting v 3

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/30940/micro_pandas

Haha, this is amazing.

Maybe have a mother scolding him not to play with his food.



Or just her little brother waiting for a turn.



Great concept!

Some quick colouring...

I forgot to add the little blood patch at the monsters feet.



Also thinking of adding another character in the right hand foreground, looking up. A bit like the little girl in my sub "my grandad is great".



Thoughts?

no girl. i love this though i would like a horizon maybe

funny stuff

I like the girl, haha. I also liked the pile of blood guts and shoes.

right- ill add the blood/shoes.

Perhaps a faint playground scene in the back?

Could do with something in the background, maybe a playground scene like you say, or horrified onlookers or something.

much prefer the hand drawn look, but what a kick ass idea - submit soon

This is hopefully the final vesion- then it can go in for the vote- Any comments?

my suggestion would be is to take out the smiley from the seesaw, I thought it's another character...

Nice idea but personally I would like to see that big hairy guy crying, like whenever he tries to play on the seesaw it always go wrong. Poor fella!



Comment on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31094/Funkynatomy

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31129/Mother_Trucker

mmm- votes for having rid of the smiley?

Yeah definately lose the smiley

Too complex for kids.

No smiley otherwise great

No smiley!

Move the slide over a bit so the stairs aren't going into the monster's mouth.

Dude, so far, you've had me sold with alot of your submissions. Your style reminds me of Edward Gorey, who I love. Keep it up, and spread your knowledge.

love the idea. get rid of the smiley!





any comments or anything would be appreciated!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/184412/noob_mixtape

lol funny :D

great concept, no smiley, and i liek the blue

Exactly what Francesa said. :)



Comments very much appreciated!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31171/Printer_Friendly

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31215/Panda_emic





submit this!!

I agree, no smiley. Nice work!

i agree move the slide...it looks like the monster is pukeing it out...oh and whats the blood on the floor for??? had he already eaten other kids???



other than that its a good idea...i like how you used the little girl to display it. its funny



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/30915/Tickle_My_Giggle_Pouch

pretty funny...looks like the other critiques pretty much nailed it....after those small changes I would say send it in



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Well it sure is funny... I like the dark one best. But without the smiley!

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Tnx!

yep, agree , no smiley and the dark tee :)

I would really appreciate if you comment:
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uahahahha, submit it!!!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/76813/autumn_leave

i love the idea!!!!!!!!!! but i'm not shure about the character design... i prefer the design idea of the monster in V1...better with the mouth open, but i liked more the hair design and the head shape.
i think u should add some shades and detail on the characters and objects

I'm Almost There

i love the idea!!!!!!!!!! but i'm not shure about the character design... i prefer the design idea of the monster in V1...better with the mouth open, but i liked more the hair design and the head shape.
i think u should add some shades and detail on the characters and objects

I'm Almost There

it's nice:) see my design! http://www.threadless.com/critique/77017/Teletubbies_Human_Version