Tentacle tim monster

what do you think about using puff ink on black

please critique

I like this. It should do well on threadless. Show us placement in v2

what about the puff ink on black color?

i think it may be cool

not puff, suede ink!

suede? yo think? better than puff?

I don't see a line defining where the bottom Tentacle Tim's body ends. Is all of that yellow background part of his body?

great colors, and I like the creature!

what about the placement??

I like this a lot dude.

Great job XD

It was a little hard to realize that there was a yo-yo there. Do you think you can make the yo-yo sting longer so that it isn't smashed in with the arms?

thanks jonojonas...

yea, do you think? thats a good idea ArsenicAlice, it looks shmashed but... its kind of the idea of the illustration its self

hey man, this is awesome, the placement is grat but i think it is a little bit too big... what do you think about changing the color of the yo-yo? maybe blue or red ... submit it



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its just because I like big placements, tnx remix

fun! keep it big!

i like. fix yoyo. bring it lower. it's tangenting with that tentacle.

add ball?

Ah ah ah!

Nice!

And finally a design on a so full of light yellow!

yeah, I like the ball idea, and definitly I'll lower the yoyo

any other comments?

man that's freaking awsum!

i agree with yo-yo idea bring it lower but i like the green

and maybe bring the whole thing a bit down coz it's too high up to the neck

i fixed the yoyo, and other little things.... now what about using puff ink on black

thanks mr spiders, and what about the special black ink!

I think the puff ink is a good idea and the yo-yo is in a better location now.

OMGAH.... I love it! So much fun! The green guy is m favorite.



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niceee, gracias seņores y seņoras!!!

submit it now!!

then?

then, is ready for submit????

submit!!!

Why don't yah make the cord for the yoyo really really long.. that would enchance the strangesness/outlandishness hence the coolness of the design.. i think.. :)

I first I thought it was really cool but looking but I think you can like a black typo at the bottom. Witch sais Tentacle Tim witch will make it look cooler and less child-T-shirt-y! With like a pink cutout around or something.. I think that would be cool addition to the t-shirt..

Different thickness of all the strokes would make it look cooler.. and more neatly drawn and detailed.. and more grown-up-y..

love tim! it looks so funny.submit.



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