what do you think????

*Marshmallows for starters.

The smoke is out of proportion to the fire.

The dragon could use horns/a fin/something on his head to balance his body.

The fire needs to be more detailed.

And what is he standing on? If that is a rock it needs a bit 'o work because right now it looks like a block of ice.

thanks alot!

i like this idea, the toasting dude looks happy. The smoke looks like some object is wedged in the dragons nose.

The kids chest is kinda scaring me. XD



Just fix some of the minor details above and it should be much better!