This is definitely an experiment. I've never submitted a critique before, and honestly, I'm confused about the whole submission process. What I really need is for someone to walk me through the whole thing, lol.



Y'all tell me what you think. :-)

hi raethlanel, i agree on the whole submission process.. it can get very intimidating... at least for noobs like us lol...



anyway, i think this design needs a bit more refinement since at the moment the image of a rose isn't yet very clear. Maybe add more details (people here LOOOOVE details), or add some secondary colors to your design.

Mk. Details like what? I'm scratching my head at what else to do to the thing. The original drawing was actually a whole rose with a stem and all, but it looks kinda weird on the shirt.

Yeah, I like it, but it needs...something else.

Like, coming down from the left shoulder. I dunno. It's sweet, just in detail needish. :-)

great job!

I too am struggling with a design with the same problem, which you critiqued, Missing Milk Carton. It has one color like yours, but it seems like this website is more about using multicolors. Which for both of our designs, I think would take away from what you have. unless you did something completely different. I like your placement of the rose bleed off at the bottom. Can they print that? As for the content of the shirt. I prefer a more conceptual message. This is just a rose graphic on a shirt. However, its a girly shirt, which I would not be the one to make a judgement call on its content.

Thanks for the comments, y'all! Time's tight right now but I'll definitely be thinking about what you've said. Maybe eventually I'll actually have something to submit. :-)