ok! this is the 2nd version with out the sun rays on the back.... i did it cuz i've wanted to create a third layer out on the back to give the whole design some more depth...

dont know about the mountains yet... any ideas?

I love this! My only suggestions is that the hills are a little to rounded at their ends. I like the idea of the hills, they just need to be more realistic looking. Keep going - great idea!



If you could help me with mine, that would be great.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29977/Floater

it looks like a fruit-by-the-foot!

where the rainbow coming out of the cloud looks really strange because of that extra curve you have there outlining the cloud...

maybe make it more curved upwards as it's being projected out of that fluff.



i don't have any issue with the hills. i quite like their rounded-ness, but i might think of expanding them a bit more to the left and right so that the design is not so condensed.

tried a different approach to the mountains... do you guys think its better?

Yup, better! But try to change that cloud into something pretty & cute.. Maybe wit a little smile on it or little hands or so.. and the mountains would be fun too if they were "comic" like.

Anyway, great idea, keep it up!

the only thing if i would change anything at all would have a leperchaun holding gold unravaling it, but it's really good right now

10x for the tip guys :)

Wow! This is a really nice design! The only thing I would say is to clean up the white lines inside the red circular part.

you have a point there... but i need to solve the red circle so it would look like it contains lots of rainbow layers. :)

I understood where you were going, but the sketchy lines don't fit in with the rest of the design. Maybe try thickening them up SLIGHTLY?

I will try, 10x :)

really like the concept. but it looks to me as if the mountains dont finish at the same point when they come down. they aint level. but love the idea

OK! here we go again :), fixed up some things yeah like!?

10x you all for the brilliant tips :D

also changed the mountain a bit..

Much cleaner! Nice

10x.. do like the new face i made for the cloud?

Much better this way! Maybe make it a little cuter all.. Like eum.. Remember Mario Bros (the videogame) they had really cute clouds.. But it's much better! Keep up the good work!

The Mario Bros are always - good inspiration! :)

Fix up the cloud and it will look amazingggggg.

the cloud kinds looks like he's winking.. i love this design!! nice work!!

he is winking! ;)

Changed the cloud and the mountains...

is it working better?

yeh looks good to me. id pres submit right around now.



can you check mine out please



http://www.threadless.com/critique/30124/Peace_Love_and_War



http://www.threadless.com/critique/30128/Net_Love



http://www.threadless.com/critique/30230/Dirty_Laundry

dont know yet.. do you think the rainbow coming out of the could is in her right position?

yeh i do... why where else do you think it might go?

dont know..... i thought about moving the rainbow and the cloud to the left...but then he wont hide beyond the mountain..

no i think its perfect...your eyes drawn towards the cloud then down the rainbow and to the end.

I think the cloud looks the best now. Submit this.

not sure about the smiley though. great concept otherwise.

The cloud farthest to the left looks a little odd.

Great improvements! submit!



comments?

what so odd in the left side of the could? could anyone explain? :|

ok, this is how its gonna be on a tee..

WOULD YOU BUY IT?

I really like it... The changes you've made benefit the tee alot.

Good luck!



The Gentle Giant Lives....critique? :P

yeh i like it. fits well and looks great.

Woah I messed up. I meant the mountain farthest to the left. It should be pointed just a tid bit maybe?

ha...ok..good point ;)

ha...ok..good point ;)

ok, hopefully this will be last time before submission.. :)

some ppl commented about the left mountain... fixed it a bit... (i know, i have issues ;| )

thanks for all the tips! remember to vote!

I really like the way this turned out! I think it's ready!

10x! you've been a supporter all the way :D

also, every body, I'm looking for an appropriate title...

Rainbow Rollup? Submit!

I think its ready submit it.

If you could Bleeding Out

Follow the rainbow road.





I like it much better with the mountains this way. It's ready to be submitted for sure. :]

This has really transformed! I think V6 is the best and ready to submit (thank goodness, huh?). Submit it already :)



Help me with mine?

wow. very good. i like it.



Critique Mine?

thanks everybody! i will design a nice presentation for it and submit!

i like it.

10X! appending approval... ;)