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OhDystopia on Oct 13 '08
Quality concept. I say the colors work as is. If anything, I'd make the brown a bit more solid, as I don't understand why you'd have solid leaves but a broken up trunk. It looks good, though, and is probably worthy of a sub. as is if you really like it.
My own design is called The Palm Reader. I appreciate all feedback. |
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really great, especially for a first sub... maybe try a slightly darker grayer brown...
Critic mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/29988/Board_Game_Surgery |
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jett90 on Oct 14 '08
Sounds good, thanks.
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Resistance on Oct 14 '08
This is good... definitely a submittable shirt... very threadless. Hit me back
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rafarte on Oct 14 '08
i tink hat s a good idea but im not sure about the body texture maby smaller
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Badgerooni on Oct 14 '08
great shirt. submit it i think.
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Dreamerbox on Oct 14 '08
great idea ... but i think if u can use realistic tree 's strokes to draw ur whole work , and a leaf instead of feather, it will be perfect
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This definitely has potential. I would work on the texture a little more. Make it look more wooden/tree-like.
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jett90 on Oct 14 '08
Great, thanks for the input.
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Ron Design Studio on Oct 14 '08
very clever, I like!
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jett90 on Oct 14 '08
Here's the updated design, with a new, darker brown. What else would you need changed to wear this shirt? Thanks for the suggestions, keep 'em coming.
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Gflash on Oct 14 '08
Somewhat I am lacking some contrast, or body on the Brown, wheras the leaves and the feather com out strong. You may try to texture the leaves with a transparent vain-structure (hope I spelled vain correct... huhu) to have some background blurr through there as wel. The look at the small picture tells what I mean.
Crunch my V2 - http://www.threadless.com/critique/30042/Turn_Me_On#v2 |
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jett90 on Oct 14 '08
cool thanks
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StrayTangent on Oct 15 '08
Pretty cool.
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Gflash on Oct 15 '08
I have changed my whole concept. Wonder what you think now.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/30143/BellyButton_Turn_On Hope yours is coming along now ! |
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purpleoptix on Oct 15 '08
Neat idea. I like the variety of textures.
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jett90 on Oct 15 '08
Cool. Thanks.
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For some reason I don't like the bird's claw it looks odd. I do like the design overall though.
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jett90 on Oct 16 '08
what should the claw look more like. Rounded, sharp, bigger, smaller???
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EricDiaz on Oct 16 '08
Cool idea!! I like this a lot but i think it would look even better if the design had a little more action in it. Right now it looks like it's about to land or take off. A flying dove shape would look better in my opinion, just google 'flying dove' for some good shapes, your concept is solid though and i also like the textured look. oooh and maybe have a few leaves trailing behind it.
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jett90 on Oct 17 '08
yeah i was thinking about possibly adding trailing leaves. Great suggestion.
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reallyreallyawesomeguy on Oct 23 '08
I really like this design. In fact it is one of my favorites that I have looked at. I do think that the claw seems to be different somehow from the rest of the design. I don't know why it just does. Keep up the awesome
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jett90 on Oct 27 '08
Sans foot. Ready Yet?
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Ghee on Oct 27 '08
COOL! Maybe change the placement!
Please "crit" my new version. http://www.threadless.com/critique/30599/Extinct |
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jett90 on Oct 27 '08
what's wrong with the placement? Where would be better?
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Cool graphic, but you might try experimenting with different sizes and placements to make the design a bit more dynamic.
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