Color options for the shirt fabric along the bottom... The image itself is also very flexible in terms of color, so I'd be happy to post any changes/suggestions if you want to see how it would look another way.

Thanks in advance for all your feedback.

Anybody? Bueller?

I will bump the crap out of this until somebody speaks up, if I gotta!

dude, it's only been one day...

Some of the wording may be hard to see, like: Land Sea Noon, Scribbler's Cross and digest next to the line in the middle.

Keep the colors as is, as I've said before, I don't think you can go wrong with a black/red/white color scheme.

I don't know enough about the subject matter to give any further input. Sorry.

Only one day, but it worked ;)

really cool idea. maybe you can look if you can give the hand a sort of old feel. like the letters around it have. Or if you want it to be smooth, make it even more stylized.

this is cool!
i can see people reading off the shirt if youre wearing it
haha

i like the blue on the right

critique mine!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29919/Peace_in_Hand

I really love this kind of stuff, and it really would look great on a tee. This is definetly something I'd buy if it was printed. You really want to take a proper look at it if you know what I mean, it's very interesting.

It would probably look good on any colour but I personally think the Silver Grey one looks best.

Groovy, submit it.

Please vote, only one day left: http://www.threadless.com/submission/181135/Monkey_Fu

I'll distress the hand a bit to make it suitably worn looking, like the text.

Day Two, Vol. Two.

Talk to me.

This is one of the few designs I would proudly own and wear, do submit!!!

Oh!!! Cream definitely works best

I really appreciate that! It'll get submitted for sure, I just want to make sure it is as good as it can be before it goes up for scoring.

I like this alot, very original idea. I like cream definitely.


Check out mine

This is really cool. I think I would like it most just on white, since it has enough going on already!

I usually go cream over white, just because it holds up better over time, but I agree that it's already pretty busy so I designed it with the intention with keeping it on something light. Thanks for the feedback!

I hope it keeps coming!

I really like the concept for the design, but I don't really like the pure black of the hand.

It'd be cool if you could redraw the hand in that sort of inkprint or inkblock line art style the lettering suggests. Then it'd look even better on cream, like old parchment!

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See i think its great as is, you will never get a consensus, so i say just sub as is I believe it will do well its unique and edgy and beautiful and very importantly not offensive.

How nice it is to have a true believer!

I like it a lot, the only thing that I notice is the nail is a bit odd looking. But that's just nitpicking, overall its great. I'd buy it.

I did just scribble that nail on there, so I'm sure it could use some refining. Thanks for mentioning it...

I hope you see it and throw me a 5 when it comes up for scoring!

Will do

I would take off the nail... it's weird.

check out mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29986/DREAMER

Yeah try to get rid of the thumbnail, looks kinda wierd.

And hm, is that pink lines near the "Occult"-text? Just something I noticed..

Not big fans of that nail! I think I'll leave it but I'll thin out the line and make it less of something you really focus on?

this is really nice, clever design

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30045/the_tv_cats
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29905/hell_yeah

very cool - i can see lots of people buying this...

submit!

let me know what u think of mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30061/Mousing_Around

Bump!

I really like the font, what is it?

I can't post my secrets up on a critique! but I'll let you know, privately ;)

topped out at 10 votes? I guess I'll just have to submit it...

I don't like the nail. Otherwise, it's real nice!

SUBMIT! great design!

ok!

Veeeeery nice.
Absolutely on white.
Have you already tried on a black background?
Maybe with a thin red line for the external boundarys.
And a bit of its wrist...

Submit and good luck!

This looks great - I think the black & white work best on cream (or maybe white) in this case. I daresay there are few other palmistry tees available out there (a quick google search reveals some pretty drab ones) so I'd think about what makes this one different. For me it's the use of colour and type. Good luck!

Oh yeah, feel free to look at mine.

Cream, just go with it man and move on...

haha, yeah I will- but now it's Friday night so it looks like I have to wait anyhow, right?

Wow!
Looks great.
Submit this.

The Way The Sun Hits Her

I dine on your compliments.

submission in the morning... the nail will be thinned out and made a bit smaller, and I may add a bit of wrist. Thanks for all the support, folks!

I really want this

you'll have your chance to $5 it!

Yo, don't submit it yet.

The lines pointing to the symbols makes the design ugly. Also, handwrite that text, my friend! It'd make it look sooo much better. TextBox text looks stupid, and would literally keep this design from ever being printed.

Right now, I really doubt this would get printed, but I think with some changes you could really bring this to another level.

Up to you, though.

I really didn't like the idea, but looking at it properly it's quite fantastic.
I don't mind the printed lettering, it actually looks really like the sort of thing you'd find in the old palm reading books.
I've got a phrenology book from the 40s and it's got very similar images to this.
I'm probably a minority, but what might stop me from buying is the colour. I'd want the hand to be slightly more subdued. but that's just me :)

It's a boy!
Breaking up is hard to do.

Will re-work slightly and and submit when I get home.

@Jellyes: The design represents the re-creation of an old diagram, such as in a phrenology book or other occult publication as twoonbee noted. For this reason, the text will be "printed" (and slightly distorted, which shows up better at a higher res) in the final design, rather than handwritten.

I finally put this one up for scoring...

Go check it out and give it a $$5!!