too many stripes on the flag. 13 total.

this is hilarious! but yes, a bit too many stripes on the flag. what does the placement look like on the tee? love the title too!



if you have time:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29635/STUBS_ROCK_HERE

Fuck yeah! wanna see placement as well. and maybe bigger cleaner guy? just don't want people to miss him. agree with flag comment. love the way you treated the ground.

but this KILLS. murder.

what are you waiting for :D

looool... its so cool!

thi alot poll will be pissed lol

submit and crit me

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29849/my_Blacklist

Changed the horizon and gave the terrain a bit more love and fixed the Star Spangled Banner!

Brilliant, just brilliant!



Have you thought about including the earth amongst the stars?

*rubs chin*



If I can do it without a green then yes...



Thanks duuuude.

mmmm yeah I see your dilemma, otherwise, its still a wicked design!

maybe add a few of those big movie set lamps by the doors to make it seem more like a setup?



comments appreciated:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29896/Tunnel_to_My_Heart

this is epic. well done

i think it is wearable :)

scotties123 on Oct 11 '08

maybe add a few of those big movie set lamps by the doors to make it seem more like a setup?



I was actually going to suggest something similar. You might play around with the idea and see if it adds or subtracts. It might be too subtle as-is, but then again, making it too obvious might kill it. So I guess you might try it and see what you think.



Maybe like these or these?

Yeah. I know what you mean. If anything, I'll add in a fan I think.



Or... If I wanted to really go out on a limb, I could do the back of the scenery on the back of the shirt...

If anything, I'll add in a fan I think.



That could work! I'd love to see what you come up with, even if it's just a rough draft. I think this design rocks!

this is amazing. i'm so happy.

Upon second glance, it might be nice with a small crater or two.

But it reads perfectly either way. Just something you could add if you feel like it.

Amazing, what are you waiting for? Submit it man!

Thanks guys. It still needs some love before submitting, I think.

Haha great design. I love the idea. It really shows an Elvis factor: Some people think Elvis is still alive. In this case, you're including the Elvis factor of people that still believe we didn't actually land on the moon.

Oh, if you get a chance, check my design out:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29924/Road_to_My_Heart

Really like this design, think you shouldn't alter it too much, the subtlety of the door is what makes it funny for me!



If you have a moment, critiques appreciated!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29287/12_Bar

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29330/Afternoon_In_Pari

looks really great so far. i almost want to see it take up more part of the shirt though by lowering the whole design and maybe even adding the extra joke of there being small stage lights used for stars hung around the top, but that might mess up the over-all composition and subtlety... so :\.

you know what to do anyhow. it's good for subbing as is already.

FRESH

cool

fantastic. maybe bring the astronauts more into the foreground a bit? I'm still clicking submit.

i liked the lady without the white outlines. other than that it's all looking good

Haha can't wait for this to get subbed

I kind of like the darker outline of v1 but I can see why the outlines of this one are white do to the light

Thanks guys. I'm also not sold on the white outlines, but I thought I'd give it a try to see what people thought. I'm going probably go back to the dark outlines.

oh snap. I dig the idea. .. I'm not too sure that it's actually illustrating the point as well as it could be though. fatheed: if you spell your name backwards it spells deehtaf... that's funny.

love it!

The scenario reminds me of the Rammstein "Amerika" video.

OH SNAP! I love this!

Submit it!

Please "crit" my new version.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30599/Extinct

vivid. I like it

Remeber me?

spllingfail

spellingfail

I remeber! dude this was ready to go 18 days ago!!

damnit, fatheed. submit this already. still on the fence about whether or not the light coming from the door should be stronger like in the previous but perhaps that made it too hard to see? regardless, this is easily one of my faves from you. submit!

The previous version had the linework whited out - but a straw poll told me that I need to stick with the dark outlines for continuity. I was never really happy with the white lines, although the brightened the door up.



Oh well - glad you like it :) It's submitted now...



CLICK HERE TO GO TO IT!

I just had a thought, too late now, but there were no stars visible in photographs of the moon landings.



This is often used by conspiracy theorists to prove the moon landing was a hoax. They do, of course, forget that it was daytime when these photos were taken.

The moon landing was not faked and I should know... I was there!

Nice idea submit and then have a look at this if you get a chance

Thanks



http://www.threadless.com/critique/29941/Shaved_Guevara

Ha! Great!

this should do well

it still bothers me that there is no footprints

awesome! this is so funny, even though I'd like to think we did actually land on the moon, haha. Good work. This will be a 5$ from me for sure.



And if you could, please check out my latest design up for critique

CINEMATIC

You're like some kind of t-shirt machine! I do agree with Chelly about the footprints though...still awesome as usual.

i think i saw this concept a few time but i must say, the drawing style is awesome! my only thought is the moon area is too large and the cleaning lady is too small . the astros could me bit bigger as well.

good luck!



please chk my design:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30770/Nuclear_Mushroom

wow, great concept and execution!

Brilliant tee! Congrats!

nice shirt brilliant!

Brilliant tee! Add the footprints and submit it so i could buy it :)

If you have a second

http://www.threadless.com/sharedesign/298617/Giant_salamander

wow! 2 years and you haven't submitted. Dude! It is ready. SUBMIT.

And when u get a chance; please check out mine? Let me know what you think? Thanks
Mana