Unless you're Shredder or Botticelli please please please help me whap this into a decent state...

Loool

keep working on it, awesome!!

I'm not sure whether to keep it scruffy or make it neat or forget about it all together.



Any advice would be splendid

hahaha funny! maybe arragne the circles horizontally! but great idea!

I like it. But maybe put the key on the front. I'd make it neat, but scruffy is also funny.

your style is jejune, and that's cool, but i think that it doesn't match the graph/measured style that your information is conveying. The key is also weird because i don't know if anyone is going to invest enough time in a t-shirt to read a key on the back. the idea is really funny, though, i LITERALLY lol'd.

Scruffy or neat? Neat or scruffy? Nuffy or screat? Thanks for all of your comments, I've taken them on board and tried to tidy it up a bit.



Please please please let me know whether you think this makes it better or worse. Or whether I'm just flogging a dead donkey here?



Thanks

The idea is really funny! I don't know if this execution will work with the Threadless voters though. You can try and sub it and if it doesn't work out rework it. Maybe a more visual approach then?

SCRUFFY really love the concept please check new version of http://www.threadless.com/critique/29760/bang_goes_the_gun

the idea is great but im not sure about the execution. when i see the design i think you could use pizza for the form. the turtles liked to eat pizza and the more turtle someone is, the more of the of the pizza is gone and under it you can see the plate maybe with some art stuff. i hope you get what i mean.

maybe you can leave a comment on mine...

hillarious!! much improved from v1! .... but u know what i

m thinking... maybe the black part can be representative of the artist... but what about the other part being a pizza (to represent the turtles) ...just a thought.... also i'd like it better with more childlike font.... not necessarily scruffy.... but childlike...

Yeah! Pizza should represent the turtles and a pallet, or something, should represent the artists.... and I think Leonardo should be more famous as an artist and Raphael maybe a bit less.

But I really like this idea!



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Thanks all - really like the pizza ideas, much appreciated. Hopefully it shouldn't over complicate things, if I can manage to do it in the right way. Will give it a go for sure.



Thanks

Artist part a palette of paint, the turtle side a pizza? Also, you'll have to make the key more obvious by moving it, at the bottom of the shirt it'll get lost.



Really good idea, also maybe re-think your colours a bit, not sure the black works with such a dark red - the font works nicely though.



If you have a moment, critique my designs

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29287/12_Bar

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29330/Afternoon_In_Paris

yep! much better! i like this version baove the rest!



i made some modifications to mine, i'd appreciate your opinion on the version and colors. thanks!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29728/noob_mixtape

haha, loved the ninja turtles.



If you have a moment, critique my designs

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29964/kite_in_the_sky

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29965/bubble_Bottle_Guy

cool man :)