Basically this picture is about a guy dropping his normal life to chase after his dream/s. And the little orange things are symbolic for the people/things he encounters on the way (and also I thought they were kind of cute).



Honestly, I don't think this is sub material, though. I don't know what I should change. Any feedback would be appreciated.

I love the little whirligigs. I think the cloud could be a little fluffier, and maybe his suit a little more defined? I feel like his hopes and dreams should be a little more abstract, while he's still stuck in the real world, ja?



Great job though! ^______________^

You mean to change the star? I think it should be different too, I dunno what could represent dreams better than a star though. Maybe I should draw the star myself (there aren't a lot of ways to draw stars, however)?



And good point with the clouds. As for the suit, I just started working with illustrator and stuff, so it's hard for me to make it really defined.. any particular suggestions?



And ty ^^