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This was totally put on a back burner and forgotten about....but now there's a second round of the travel theme, so here we go again....
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The sign says "we're sorry...this item is temporarily out of stock"
So they're out of Africa. Bummer, I was really wanting to go there. |
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I hate being the very first one to comment because I feel like maybe I recommend things that other people like just the way they are...and then the designer does all kinds of work to change it, and it turns out that other people prefer it that way...but here goes.
I think the fact that each one says "0.00" confuses me a little bit...maybe just $ on a price tag in front of each one. Something about the design is a little flat to me, but again, wait to see what other people say. I LOVE the concept and the idea. Creative girl! |
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I think im missing the punch line, why is Africa out of stock?
and I also agree that they shouldnt have $0.00 price tags. as far as design it all looks good. crit me? http://www.threadless.com/critique/56308/Socks_and_clocks |
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The first version of this was done for Woot's "movie titles re-interpreted" theme about a year and a half ago maybe. My movie was "Out Of Africa"....that's why Africa is out of stock. I wondered if I should still go with that or not.
The pricetags....I don't actually remember my reasoning for the $0.00. Maybe to imply that it's priceless? I'm not so crazy about it though. I need to change it somehow. I wondered about putting some sort of swirling clouds on the big blue circle...but that may be too busy with all the boxes. Maybe shading? Maybe put some sort of moon or sun on the wall near the shelves? Too distracting? |
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What it might look like if there were a travel store.