What if a little girl found some blotter paper (LSD) in her parents room.....

well... she looks very happy



Placement, Colors, illustration, etc.. please comment

cool, but maybe the same color for both arms

yea agree with remix. the blue arm looks thinner than the other one. the rest look fine.



critique mine tooplz

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29118/Prohibitions_To_All_Aliens_On_Earth

I paint it on purpose that way, should I make same color for both arms?

Really cool! What color shirt?

This is pretty cool. I'm curious about shirt choice, also.

mmmm, I like it on white, or light blue or pink

I think, you can post this for scoring..... its really cool....

Let's see some colors.

yeah this one looks pretty psychadelic. Never took LSD, but maybe dialated eyes or drool or something to show she's trippin hard. Oh, and a little more saturation, it begs for a colorful shirt.

It's really great. I want one!

Oh...the arms look fine. I'd leave them as they are.

I don't even know which are the arms!



I really like your choice of colors - they go very well together without being overwhelming. Like some of the above commenters wrote, I'm also curious as to what color shirt you may choose.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/29261/wooow_blotter_paper_makes_me_happy

Ugh, disregard my posting of your own URL there. I meant to post my own.



Comment and Vote Back Please?

Great cartooning. It reminds me of the "Where the Sidewalk Ends" sketches, if you know of the book. The author of that book might have been trippin' on LSD too.

mmm so do you think more saturation will be look better?? and what about the placement, what do you all think?

Shel Silverstein.

Hi mpeon



you left a comment and a link here with a link to this critque.



This is called spamming



This is considered rude when done on a design up for voting.



it is ok in critiques.



Please don't do it as others will also follow your example.



read here

ok I didnt know it was rude what I done, I saw everybody doing it.

Yep, submit this!

I want to see the shirt color! muahaha

No problem mpeon

so whats the feedback?!! just add the design to a color t-shirt, to see how it looks?

wicked , wicked design...!! i love it...i think u should try it on pastel coloured shirts... tha would look awesome in a creepy, childlike kinda way...



please comment and vote on mine:



http://www.threadless.com/submission/180760/Mother_Nature

New cleaner Version!!!

Im not sure about the title, maybe forguet the LSD and go for "dreams" or something like that.

What do you all think about it

Placement, colors, a new title, etc.

please comment!

New cleaner and "better colors" Version!!!

Im not sure about the title, maybe forguet the LSD and go for "dreams" or something like that.

What do you all think about it

Placement, colors, a new title, etc.

please comment!

no doubt , submit version # 1

maaaan how can u change it? v1 rockSSSSS submit it!!!

crit me

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29849/my_Blacklist

SUB V1 - not 2 and 3

I agree!

Version 1 is the best! Sub it the way it is!

version 1!!!

it makes me cheerful!



check mine out! Thanks!

Squiggly Lines

go back to version 1!!!!

13 "submit this" in that version!!! people love it!!

you only have to see wich shirt color to use... use 4 different colors and ask people wich one looks better

Kinda like the line detail in the first version best but this looks good too! http://www.threadless.com/critique/29955/pastards

hey , i revisit ur work again , i still think ur work is best at v-1 , ur design is suitbale put on light tee as white , light yellow , or light blue .. u should reture to v-1 and submit it .. good luck



besides, many thanks for previous critique on my work : A spider spun a web of Monalisa's portrait



now feel free 2 score & comment me in the running



sincerely

version 1 is the best i think.if you are not sure use last version's colors and on different tee colors.you should submit v1. good luck with that ;)



critique mine pleaasee http://www.threadless.com/critique/30349/the_hot_dog_dream

so v1 better.... ok I'll post a tee placement of v1 soon, to see how it looks like,

thanks everybody for the backfeed =)



please check out my new tee design

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30576/tentacle_tim

man... version 1 in a print and white t-shirt

I think this is the one seņores y seņoras... I really like this one better than V1, what do you all think!

nice nice i like.

still prefer v1..



dude.. you've got 14 submits on v1.. just go for that.

I have to agree with mosquito.... i much prefer V1....!



if u have a minute i'd appreciate a comment and vote on min



http://www.threadless.com/submission/183315/Masai

dude, v1 was the best! good luck!



please chk my design:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30770/Nuclear_Mushroom

boy boy boy. don't be a fool. V1 is solid. seriously if you're going to submit this design V1 is your best shot, and it's a good shot.



V1

i disagree with everyone here. i like v4 the best. it looks the most original as i've seen the drawing style from the first one tons of times before and i'm not too fond of all the extra pen shading you did.



love the colours in this version and the distressing. it's sooo much better.



but don't feel like you need to listen to any one person, just go with which one you like best.

and you should keep the title about blotter!

I agre with you ginetteginette, I think V4 its a much better illustration, the other one its kind of a fast pen sketch drawing, but everyone its telling me the V1 its my best shot, so..., that kind of confuse me..., the title... uuummm I dont know, drugs aren't a good subjet, right? maybe I can go in other way... like child mind traveling, dreams, imagination or something like it.

thanks for comments seņores y seņoras!!!

I like v1 the best.

told you... v1

maybe you should make a blog about it and see what more seasoned designers/bloggers might think? if you're still unsure it doesn't hurt to ask more people's input.

or you can always submit both, 1 one week, and the other a week after.

I like v4 the best, it looks more worn and better for a tshirt I think.

hooo thas a good idea!!! I'll put in to a blog, thanks!!!

I just don't like the vintage look on v4...

can I submit both?

I don't know.. you can give coloroptions.. but these are just two completely different designs...

i could totally submit both if you wanted. it's not against the rules, but i would suggest submitting both with a little time between one another. like one one week, and then the other the next. so that people aren't scoring them one after the other so fast (some people get quickly annoyed by stuff like that)

I agree with ginetteqinette. You should submit both, with a week difference in each.



I like the V1 more, because the style of drawing suits the colours very well, and it stands out. Which I like a lot.



V4 would be my second favourite. The soft colours gives it a nice tone with the grey shirt you've chosen, plus I like the "old t-shirt" effect you gave it.



Good luck!



If you have time, check out my design!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30927/The_Roads_We_Walk_After_School

thanks, ok, then I'll submit both in a few days, thanks amigos for all comments!!!

m.

Tough call.....V4 is very fine, but the distressing takes away from the image.

submit also version 1!!!!

Back to V1, but reloaded

the creatures appears with UV INK.... or not?

please comment

saludos y gracias

m.

any comments guys?

this is great!

This is good stuff, the only thing I'd say is maybe try a more muted palette just to see what its like, but other than that it looks ready to go if your satisfied sub that bad boy.

As far as presentation of your design, be sure to show what the shirt looks like when it isn't in the sun light. It might also be good to give the creatures some different shades of lines. UV ink comes in multiple colors; so, be sure to play with that.



This is fun! Please comment on an idea I'm working on:



Slippery When Wet

yeah gracias,

Tomorrow I will submit a new version showing better what I want.



"the creatures around the girl, are colored with the sun lignt (uv ink)"



Then what about the title, is it good, or just use the one from V4 "The fantastic journey of a child's mind"

http://www.threadless.com/submission/184882/The_fantastic_journey_of_a_child_s_mind

Very cute. Well done. I like the v4 title, but that might just be me.



Reflection of a Saint

thanks man, any other help?

live all to appear at the sun light? or just the creatures?

i'd say keep them all in regular ink, the colors work much better with everything colored in and with UV ink it probably wont look as good, love the design though



please give mine a look

EyeSocket

do you think so?, not adding a special ink. could be....

do you notice the new tones?

amigos?

any help please

I'd just do this as a normal print. The design is wonderful expressive. Maybe bring those colors out a bit more to pop, but otherwise it's well done!



Crit me: http://www.threadless.com/critique/36558/Imperial_Walker

thanks man... any other help??

acualy man i would go for v1 u got 19 hits to submit why all this changes?

its rocks on v1

crit me

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36580/birthday_helpers

look its also cool now both have diff style so maybe submit it as both style so wat u worked hard for this so show it!

I would do all in normal ink. I think it looks really good, so i don't think you need to change anything.



I'm not crazy about the tee color, but other than that i think you done.



Wanna check mine out?

I like this colors better,

I can submit a new version with some shirt color opcion

Dunno about the dullness of the colours but otherwise V8 looks good

Definitely submit, this is great.

should I make a Flash presentation?

Unnecessary. Your design is at a point where almost everything else added will just be superflous. You have a SOLID design and style. Just hope that everyone else likes your style.

For good measure.

please put some tee shirt color options i think this would look great in palid pink or in some kind of palid yellow not creme

i think a little presentation in flash wont harm your design, in that way we could zoom the desgin and look it in the placement



whenever you have time please comment

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36431/little_king

I really like the design & the muted colors. Add some other pale shirt colors & submit it.

ok I'll add some other shit color... I just dont know how to make the zoom option hehe..

Very nice. I like it on the cream the best. It works well with the colors in the design.



Lobster

Nice job! I really like it. This makes me happy!



Critique mine Here

i like it i agree with the rest stick with regular ink and submit it!



u have any ideas as to what i should add to mine, i agree it seems like it is missing something but i also dont want to go overboard.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47588/gloomy#v2





thank you!