Revised a illustration submission from Threadless.

Looks pretty cool. Not crazy about the white tee, but then I'm never crazy about white tees (they only look awesome for like the first three times you wear them, m i rite?). But I'm not sure how you could change it; maybe a sandy tee, but then the bold colors would look odd . . . How about an inverse? White shoes on black tee? I don't know. Keep it the way it is.



Please vote/comment on my design: http://www.threadless.com/submission/179875/Freudian_Slip

This is one of the first t's I've seen that look like it's supposed to be on a white t.

Thanks guys!

I happen to like the design on white, but I do know that white has its issues with the cloth material.



Here is a test with the inverse.

Both look awesome, I really like this shirt - your comments on my designs were much appreciated!



Best of luck!

Hi Adriana! I like the black now better just not so sure about the placement of the shoes? Maybe a little more random and different sizes on the shirt. Just a suggestion. =)

I like the white one. THe paint drops looked cool there



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maybe make the paint drops go no the white part?

make the drops seem if they are on the shoes, instead of behind them?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28144/quot_The_Way_The_Sun_Hits_Her_quot