help please!

This is looking quite nice, I think you should define the lines better, they look a bit messy, not that much but they can be cleaner. ANd show placement on the tee so people get a better idea of where this is going.

Ooh this looks very promising. I'd like to see the boat in the bottom left hand corner in terms of placement on shirt. I think a few more star pattern animals would look nice but perhaps smaller ones so you don't detract from the bear. I agree with the line comment, as much as I like delicate lines in this case it's hard to see. Just a few ideas, it's looking lovely.

the bear is supposed to be ursa major.. is that coming across?

thanks guys! :)

I think it's fairly obvious that the bear is ursa major. I agree with Retroludo that some small constellations would be nice; perhaps ursa minor, or canes venatici? Both are small animal constellations in the vicinity of ursa major. In my opinion, you could even replace a few light houses with smaller constellations because I think the "stars as guide points" theme is pretty clear. Either way, I look forward to seeing what you do with this.

I like the sketchy quality to this but I think the clouds need to be more defined. This is a good idea, and I agree with 4nz3n make a few more small constellations then it'll be amazing.



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I also think the sketchy quality of the lines is what contributes to the design, don't make it computerised. The clouds could indeed be added to and placement would be nice. It's a lovely design, I'd wear it.



If you have time I'd love feedback on mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/27704/My_brain_is_fried

or comment on my first submission :)